Sins

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Action and Adventure  |  House: Writing Circle

Humans have found the physical forms of demons - the sins. Sloth, found by the humans and captured in his slumber now lies within the humans' grasp.

The sins, especially Wrath, are not happy. As humans conduct their experiments, Sloth ends up dying. Time passes and finally Wrath gives the humans a fearsome declaration - war.

Table of Contents

Chapter One

Sins will have a new chapter every Wednesday. Read Chapter

Chapter Two

Sorry for updating late in the time :O! Here it is * ^ *! Read Chapter

Chapter Five

War *^ * ! How will the humans react to the Sins fearsome declaration! Find out soon enough! Read Chapter

Chapter Six

After Wrath's declaration of war to the humans, the satanic circle disappeared. Wrath turned to the Sins before her and stared at Sloth... Read Chapter

Chapter Seven

Lust and Sloth   “This is insane! You guys are completely insane!”   Sloth stared at the army, his hands... Read Chapter

Chapter Eight

“Something’s wrong, I can’t sense Lust anymore.”   Wrath sat on the mountain of bodies while holding a decapitate... Read Chapter

Chapter Nine

Sorry for being a day late > Read Chapter

Chapter Ten

  “What of these two my queen?   The rest of the Sins had appeared before her with two traitors in front of Wrat... Read Chapter

Chapter Eleven


Sorry for the late chapter... My power cut off due to the storm we're having here.... This is the last chapter and I hope you guys enjoy it * ^ *! Season two will be coming out soon!
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Recent Comments

blackheart38

An epic start, I like your naming choices, like Wrath, that's a name to spread fear through the humans. I'm definitely interested to see how this story turns out, you held my attention throughout. Wrath seems dangerous, and I'm interested in who she is.
The dialogue was done quite well, the choice of words each character spoke seemed to have meaning and purpose, as well as adding to the suspense and mystery of the situation.
The chapter left me wanting to know what happens next, and that is a very essential aspect of a story.
Overall, this was an excellent start to a story which I can already tell will be filled of action.

Fri, July 28th, 2017 12:10am

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Thank you > w

Thu, July 27th, 2017 5:12pm

Jack Chapel

This is a fantastic book that will definitely hook you and entertain you, I couldn't put it down. However be warned this book is genuinely scary.

Sun, August 6th, 2017 12:52am

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Thank you and I appreciate the comment and read

Sat, August 5th, 2017 6:00pm

C.A. Exline

I liked this, though some of the phrasing was awkward. The intro worked well and the premise seems creative. You also closed the chapter well and alluded to enough of the setting (without info-dumping exposition) to foster curiosity.
I will, of course, read and review further.

Sun, August 13th, 2017 5:17pm

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Glad that you liked it and decided to read further! I am also trying to get feedback on this piece to see I should structure the new season coming out for it... Kinda have my fingers crossed that I can make it better than the first season! Thank you for commenting

Sun, August 13th, 2017 3:01pm

Chris Wernstrum

The characters caught my curiosity right away. I will definitely continue reading.

Thu, October 12th, 2017 7:52pm

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Awesome, I am glad that you liked it and I appreciate your support!

Thu, October 12th, 2017 1:01pm

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