Unconditionally

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Poem by: Corine Pelletier

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Status: Finished | Genre: Poetry | House: Booksie Classic

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There is only one kind of unconditional love. A mother and her child.

Submitted: July 06, 2017

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Unconditionally,

Irrevocably,

Eternally,

in love with you.

We’ve never met.

But, I know that the moment that I’ll lay my eyes on you,

you’ll steal my heart.

You’ll teach me the meaning of bravery and strength.

I’m afraid that that’s asking a lot of you.

You who’s first breath will be a miracle.

Fragile, weak and soft.

Yet, you know what you want,

and you’ll stop at nothing to scream it out loud.

Food, warmth and sleep, you’ll demand.

If the honor of meeting you is mine,

I’ll obey your every command.

Because I am,

unconditionally,

irrevocably,

eternally,

in love with you.

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Bert Broomberg

Comment | 4 words

Thu, July 6th, 2017 3:00pm

Nice thoughts, nice poem.

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Comment | 2 words

Thu, July 6th, 2017 3:38pm

Thank you!

zuki

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Thu, July 6th, 2017 3:54pm

Eternally a good poem!

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Comment | 3 words

Thu, July 6th, 2017 4:00pm

Thank you :D

Tom Allen714

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Thu, July 6th, 2017 4:17pm

Very sweet poem...Tom...

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Comment | 1 words

Thu, July 6th, 2017 7:01pm

Thanks :)

hullabaloo22

Comment | 9 words

Fri, July 7th, 2017 12:34pm

Tells it how it should be. Nice one, Corine!

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Sun, July 9th, 2017 1:04pm

Thanks :D

Akumakaze

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Sun, September 17th, 2017 7:20pm

Sounds a lot like something I've read before, Corine. Has this ever left Booksie by chance? Like a magazine article or something. If not, then maybe it was just something really similar or either I read this before and just now read it again. It's really good though. Maybe this one should be published beyond Booksie.

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Tue, September 19th, 2017 7:47am

I don't have any accounts anywhere else. The theme is very common thou and I'm sure others have felt this. I will keep it in my pile of good ones and see what I can do with it in the future.
Thank you for reading!