When The Sun Falls

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21 year old Rayog, a Centillion prince born in the year 3159 on the corrupt planet Disco Mango Panda of sector 06 (D.M.P.), otherwise known as Dump to Rayog until he gets stranded with the peasants and when it reaches night only a few don't participate in the "Midnight walks" as they call it and apparently Rayog didn't know the lower class as well as he thought.

Submitted: July 06, 2017

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"About 5000 years ago, 20 years, 6 hours, 15 minutes, and 11 seconds from Earth's untimely Demise, Sir Scott Gark, a Flormp scientist from Pluto, had discovered Interstellar space travel. While messing around with his teleportation quard he had the ingenuous idea to attach it to his standardized Rocket jet seeing as it fuses to any solid object but dirt. Instantaneously and accidentally teleporting Scott 54.7 miles south by south east of former 3900 year old pentagon after fusion." Mr.Iaronk droned. Old studies usually started off this way, boring, ancient, and nobody cares, or at least to Rayog it did. Close to 10 minutes later a pop-quiz shows up in which Rayog flunked (digitally graded). Seeing as Rayog was a privileged little son of a King, (See what I did there) his parents hardly cared whether he flunked, failed, or passed. So Rayog just left the class even with Mr.Iaronk screeching for Rayog to get back there but who cared, there was a peasant war raging on below the hover craft, that's in orbit in the atmosphere, in which the royals lived. Never mind that, Rayog had just left the school and was on his way to the royal drug dealer, (No one said they were perfect Royals) in which Rayog bought a Coke or at least the original way it was made on Earth, speaking of planets Rayog happened to live 2 light years from Earth on Disco Mango Panda of sector 06 (D.M.P for short). Rayog thought from time to time about how the abbreviation of his planet was appropriately named, DuMP. Now was one of those times, anyway Rayog had just spent $50 Earth dollars on this Coke, an elixir that makes you extra happy. so Rayog wasn't going to waste this and immediately drank it. having nothing to do he went to check on the so called war, that his parents told him about but only during the night did the peasants fight which was the time Rayog wasn't allowed up and actually forced into his room but also half the time he was drunk or high off the Coke anyway. So to Rayog the wars didn't really even happen. Rayog made his way to his parent's quarters to talk to them about what is going to happen to the planet over the next month, and happens to over hear the big plans to get rid of the peasants and really take over D.M.P. but being drunk and high Rayog just barges in and his parents are with the Lieutenant Disco who founded this planet. Rayog's parents were in no shock of him barging in wobbling, as they did it too. So they simply sent him to the doctor to be sorted out. After the doctor, Rayog happened to have noticed his parents weren't there and the time is 9:00, sunset. Not supposed to be up right now, Rayog went to look down at the war and to Rayog he had just thought the planet was red but with every passing second, blood splattered the ground. But the real big problem was that it wasn't peasants versus peasants it was peasants versus the royal guard. But looking through glass wasn't good enough. Now's a good time to note that there are multiple areas on the base that are linked plainly through outer walk ways that suspend over a mile drop to D.M.P. So Rayog walked over the one that took him to his room and looked over the edge to see something hurdling towards the base nocking him off and flinging him to impending doom. Turns out after an hour of falling, the peasants caught Rayog and held him hostage to watch his own royals be slaughtered and peasants too. the thing is that this happens every night and Rayog has been sitting atop this injustice but if the peasants were to discover he was the D.M.P. prince would mean the end of his life. The peasants tell Rayog about the cannibals that rule the peasants. But that the cannibals are unknown to the royals. Rayog sates, "Well if the cannibals rule what is so great about them." A peasant explains how they have unnatural powers beyond compare and if defied they will Kill and eat who ever stands in their way. Rayog figures that is why there are no bodies during the day. Within the next few days of Rayog being tortured and held hostage, with few other guards, Rayog's parent's send out a reward for who ever can find Rayog at $6,000,000,000,000,000 and the cannibals happen to stumble upon it and set out for Rayog who is their hostage. To the Cannibals speed is no matter, being able to travel faster than light, just seeing as Rayog is royal, there was no option but to eat him and be done. Rayog also sees the reward and has one of the guards bite through the rope binding him and escapes through a vent when the peasants weren't looking. just as the sun rises Rayog makes it out and is safe during day but must make it back up to the base before night. Hours pass with no such luck of getting back up, until about 10 minutes (with no hope left) before Dusk when Rayog sees a peasant  with a teleportation quard and sneaks up behind the peasant unsuccessfully stealing the quard but knocks the peasant out right after. 1 minute left, and Rayog unsuccessfully teleports him self to the Cannibal base instead of the Royal base and finds no one there until three seconds later when a cannibal drops and stabs Rayog 15 times in the back and twice in the head then eats every last bit of pampered meat. Of course how would any one know any of this but you I mean you were there all the time watching him until the right time when you could kill him, Mr. Iaronk the hidden cannibal.


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