A killer among friends

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

Submitted: July 24, 2017

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Jennifer was a 17 year old teenager that live with her mother her mother was divorce with only with Jennifer and her two brothers The one brother live with her but the older one did not he was married and had his own house Jennifer and her mom and her brother they were living at middle class neighborhood in Arleta, California, not to far from Los Angeles when Jennifer was eight years old she became friends with Ellen that just moved right around the corner from her house Ellen was a big girl and shy around a lot people her and Ellen spend there days hanging out spending more time together every day they would ride bike go swimming and they had a lot of sleepovers Jennifer's mom took Ellen in her family like she was one of her own daughters and then the two girls spots Carla she was a nother girl that lived in ther neighborhood that was born and raised and was also considered a best friend to both of the girls the early 80s came along and the girls moved out of middle school and entered highschool there interest haved moved far beyond with little dolls they dress up like peers rocks and headbands to the scorpions and motley crue and had a deep interest in boys looks and acceptance Jennifer was a social butterfly and was a considered pretty and she was stylish outgoing and had a great personality and everybody loved Jenny was a topical teenager who love spending her weekends with ellen and Carla and they went swimming and had cookout on a grill Jens mom was a laid-back parent who accept all Jen's friends and so they enjoy being there with Jen and her mother Ellen was what you would call the complete opposite of Jen instead of blossoming she blew up and obese insecure teen with a little of confidence she crave the attention that Jen received she would notice boys flirting with Jen and not her wich grew on her already weak self esteem Jen's friend ellen came from a family who didn't set rules or boundaries she never had a curfew and never got grounded never had any of those dreaded but much needed teenage lectures Ellen beame a teen Mom before she even reaching adulthood and so Jen's mom helped her and the child even called her Nanny and her other friend Carla she was 18 years old described tall skinny with red hair and promiscuous many say she looked decent when she applied make up but she seldom did and was some what a tomboy she also a drug user who regularly skipped school and hung out with the wrong crowd and then she dropped out of high school Ellen and Carla had many things in common including their lack of loyalty towards Jen when the two came together their feelings for Jen became noticeably toxic they would call her names talk behind her back like she was a slut due to her harnlessly flirting with guys and one day Ellen and Jen were at the local mall shopping when Ellen suddenly put lingerie in to Jen's purse they were both caught in detained by the security guards and when Jen's mom picked up Jen she was upset and grounded Jen later on that night Ellen came knocking on Jen's door Jen opened the door Jen asked Ellen what she wanted and that she could not come in because she was grownded Jen told Ellen that it was wrong what she did put the lingerie in her purse so now I have to take responsibility for my actions and Jen shut the door on Ellen face and so Jen and her mom was sitting in the living room and Jens mom looked at Jen and told her that she was proud of her for standing up for herself and taking responsibility for her actions so Jen mom started double thinking about Jen's relationship with ellen but knowing teenagers make mistakes and knowing the two girls have been a part of each other's life since young children so Jen's mom dropped the issue meanwhile Ellen's parents failed to care so unlikely Ellen didn't learn any lessons aside from being extra sneaky next time life went on and so did the friendship between the three girls but the jealousy Ellen felt towards jen was turning bitter resentment as she continued to get ignored and pick on by boys somewhere in her mind Jen was the blame Jen briefly dates boyfriend well their relationship with sexual but didn't last long they soon break up and soon after that Carla started a relationship with Danny Jen isn't upset or at least she's appears to be okay with it Carla and insecurity and jealousy rubs Danny the wrong way so Danny breaks up with Carla and is left devastated and believes another girl must be the reason why he broke it off she continues to attempt perioclically calls him and drives by his house not yet ready to give him up and Carla hatred for Jen sparked when she drives up in her little grey car by Danny's house one day and spot him and Jen together holding hands and kissing at the end of his driveway she was in Rage and speed up to them and pulls down her window to let them know that they were caught and how much of a slut Jen was at this point she most likely assumes that Danny still cares for her and will apologize and Danny has feelings for jen instead Danny tells Carla to go away and continues to hold on to Jen now there fighting Carla also drifts away from Jen's mother meanwhile Carla and ellen started hanging out together much more and why so they could release their frustrations to one another Ellen doesn't trust her boyfriend around girls especially Jen and one afternoon while Jen was over Ellen's apartment she was in Ellen's bedroom ellen asked Jen to go in the kitchen and grab her bottles when Jen walk by ellen's boyfriendHe pulled her onto his lap without warning and when Jen attempted to get up ellen walked in and became in Rage at Jen and told her to leave Jen tries given an explanation but ellen would not listen to it one day Ellen spots Jen at a park with her family and waited for Jen to walk by herself and attacked her with beer bottle slaps and so Jen scream and her mother and brother come running over to Jen to see if she was okay Ellen and Carla are fed up and get together and formulated a plot to get rid of Jen once and for all Carla and Ellen pretended to apologize to Jen she is excited that her two best friends are back in her life and her excitement is easily noticeable by her mother Carla calls Jen and asked if she wanted to hang out and go to Stone Hurts Park and talk Jen excitedly agrees and tells her mom off her plans saying I'm going out with Carla we're going to the stone hurts Park I promise I'll be back home by 8 p.m. as she leaving she turns to her mother says I love you which put a smile on Jen's mom face Jen got into Carla car and her mom waved to Carla and Carla way back at her they meet up with Ellen and follow each other in separate vehicles up to Stone Hurts park on the way up to the park Jen is chatting with Carla completely unaware of what her two best friends had in mind for her Carla is eerily calm and portrays no sign that would signal a red flag the girls decide they're going to the National Forest it's unknown if this was part of the plan or ellen and Carla figure at that point that the National Force would be more isolating when they reach the force they parked in a dirt lot near a wooden area which is located near the Creek and Colby Canyon Ellen and Carla get out of their vehicles and begin to yell at Jen who is still sitting in the passenger side of the car Jen begins crying in the girls force her out of the car and begin to get physical by pushing and shoving Jen calling herNames accusing her of sleeping with their boyfriends Jane who has been sitting in the car watching from a short distance decide to get out of the vehicle at this point the conversation is getting and increasing intense Jen who just moments ago was laughing and was listening to music with who thought where her best friends is now fearful of them she has no one to help nowhere to run and is quickly realizing the situation that she got herself into Carlock grabs her by the wrist and pulls her to Helen telling her let's go for a walk then who is still crying hesitates before Carla comes up and pushes her toward the wooded area all four of them walked down an embankment to the creek Carla and Helen continued screaming at Jen Carla and Helen Gangsta by her hair and once again she accused Jen of sleeping with their boyfriends Helen steps beside the creek and pushes gin for Carla who is return to shove her to the groundMake it her lose control of her purse which has fallen into the muddy wet area Jen is frantic and begins to beg for her forgiveness most likely she thought that up until they dragged her to the creek that they were just going to beat her up and leave her there now she is certain that they have other intentions and plead frantically to them but her cries fall on deaf ears and Jane that is terrified started running back to the car mean while she hears Jen screaming for her help but she was helpless and feared for her own life ellen and Carla continue to be in better Jen mainly focusing on her face the beating is so servere that one of her earrings and a pulled out of her ear and is entangled in to her long brown hair one of them as something perhaps a knife a rock and hacks at her beautiful brown hair clumps fall to the ground they begin to carry Jen Who weigh no more 98 lb Helen carries her feet while Carla carries her arms which are bent at the elbow and behind her back the to carry her to the shallow water which is approximately in a 8 inch deep and carefully holds her head underwater she struggles for several minutes then stops they continue to hold her head under water for several more minutes and then spots a 4 ft 100 pound log and carry it over and place it on her head and neck area Helen and Carla calmly walk back to their cars and speed off Jen's body lice fly and still in the ankle-deep water face down the same position as she was held down in one foot lies place over the other and her go anklet reflects from the afternoon sunlight when arm is bent back behind her at the elbow as they speed it out Jane as Carla what happened and she scream and asked what happened, carla said oh my God oh my God I killed Jenny Jenny dead Jenny fails to return home by 8 p.m. and her mother is just getting worried and shes going into a panic mode she calls Carla and asked if Jenny was with her Carla said no she got into a red car with some guys she said she was good in that they were bringing her home so Jen mom call ellen Hlellen picks up the phone and says hello Jen mom ask ellen if she had seen Jen and she said no that she been at her niece's birthday party all day Ellen said if she sees her she will tell her to call her two hours goodbye no Jen she calls Jen brother over to the house and his wife they started call all around that new Jen so the next step her mom calls the police the police can't do anything because she wasn't missing more than 24 hours so she went riding around looking for Jenny she slept in her car in front of the house the next morning she went back to the police station to do a missing person report She told the police that Jen was last seen with Carla when she called Carla she said she jumped into a red car with guys Jen's mom told the police that Jen would not get into a car with Guys she did not know so the police went to Carlas house and she gave the police the same story she gave Jen's mom. Ellen she came over Jen's house knocking on the door Jen's mom opens the door and ellen gives her a hug ellen asked Jen's mom if anybody heard from her yet Jen mom said now the police are looking at this point ellen had Jen my wrapped around her finger so later that night came ellen came back to Jen's mom's house and said her daughter said that Jenny was in the woods Jen's mom and Greg and his wife and ellen daughter started go in the woods to look for Jenny the little girl said there's Jenny which it was an owl flying up in a tree as they put their flashlights up they seen a tree carved and it said Jen and ellen best friends for ever they all looked at ellen and said I thought you said you never been here before Ellen said I haven't Ellen said Dan must of carved it but no sign of Jen so they all went back home and then three days later ellen had Jen's mom going everywhere questioning people just trying to get off track so the three days came by some hikers makes the gristly discovery after stopping by the creek at first they discovered a piece of clothing which turned out to be jinsop which came off during the struggle they look up in From A Distant Moon notice her decomposing body and ran off to alert the police the police had to go to Jen's mom's house and give her the bad news that they found Jenny body Jen's mom was so devastated of her daughter's death and spend my many months looking for her daughter's killer Ellen play the Grieving friend and started to go around with Jen's mom question pointed fingers she even had Jen's mom put a guy through a glass window course she had to pay for it the police also told Jen's mom she had to stop playing detective and let them do their job of course ellen still had Jen's mom stalk out possible suspects ellen became strangely obsessed with taking over Jen's life and even used her makeup and her clothes and even tried to take over Jen's bedroom but Jen's mom told her no she kept Jen's room untouched and fell in a deep depression couple months later Jen's brother just had their first child Lisa so she thought it was time to pack Jen's things up and turn the bedroom into a nursery so she started to go on with her life and ellen kept trying to push It Jen's mom said it's time to stop now I have to move on and she told ellen she thinks it be best if she moved back home ellen she was mad so she moves out and Jen's mom still tries to be nice to her one day she bumped into her at theGrocery store and invited her to the family dinner after that Jean could not keep the secret in any longer so she stops at the police station and opens up about what happened to Jenny they take recorded conversation and let Jen's Mom listen to it after that the place picked up Carla and ellen and took them to the police department and everybody was just watching as they brought ellen and Jen's mom came up to ellen and smacked her in the face Ellen knew the truth came out ellen and Carla were arrested convicted and sentenced to life in prison




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