Don’t Say It!
Don’t say those words
For I could not take the pain
I never want to lose you
From my life again.
My mind’s my own worst enemy,
I think that you’ll agree,
Don’t you go and shut me out
And leave me just with me.
There’s no one else that I do trust,
With you I speak my mind,
I always want you in my life,
For we’re two of a kind!
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Short, simple and nice poem.
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Thanks so much for that!
Have no fear, Mikee will always be here, Hully--thanks!
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Well, I'm hoping!! Thanks for reading, Mike!
Its always a joy when we can find someone who's dependable, empathetic and accepts us just as we are. Though the fear of things changing and them growing apart or leaving can be hard to swallow, especially for people with anxiety and depression or other mental illnesses, its hard to find people, and hard to let them go.
Well written, though I think the line: "and leave me just with me' would be better as 'and leave me with just me,' bc it matches the rhyme sceme better. Just a suggestion! Don't have to take my word for s- though lol. :) Thx for sharing. :)?
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Thanks so much for reading, Stars ( can I call you that?) That line you picked up on, I've read it both ways and to be honest I think they both work just as well....Thanks for saying that though!
Anyway, glad you enjoyed the poem.
Another great poem...Tom...
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Thanks for reading, Tom!
Raw and easy to relate, I like. Actually, thank you, you may have just inspired me.
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Thanks for that, Raven! Glad you got something from it!
What a tender and loving piece, Hully :)
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Thanks, jaylisbeth!
Love this. :) Short, sweet, and full of emotion. Nice job. :)
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Thanks, Marie!
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