Don’t Say It!
Don’t say those words
For I could not take the pain
I never want to lose you
From my life again.
My mind’s my own worst enemy,
I think that you’ll agree,
Don’t you go and shut me out
And leave me just with me.
There’s no one else that I do trust,
With you I speak my mind,
I always want you in my life,
For we’re two of a kind!
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Comments
Have no fear, Mikee will always be here, Hully--thanks!
Its always a joy when we can find someone who's dependable, empathetic and accepts us just as we are. Though the fear of things changing and them growing apart or leaving can be hard to swallow, especially for people with anxiety and depression or other mental illnesses, its hard to find people, and hard to let them go.
Well written, though I think the line: "and leave me just with me' would be better as 'and leave me with just me,' bc it matches the rhyme sceme better. Just a suggestion! Don't have to take my word for s- though lol. :) Thx for sharing. :)?
Another great poem...Tom...
Raw and easy to relate, I like. Actually, thank you, you may have just inspired me.
What a tender and loving piece, Hully :)
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