Lesser Opinion, Valued Exaggeration

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Other  |  House: Booksie Classic
Lesser Opinion, Valued Exaggeration is an experiment using a different way of poetry I have not tried before. The goal is Four Lines, first is L, next O, then V, finally E. This is repeated until completed.
What do you think of this way of writing? Maybe I will try it again with another work...

Submitted: August 18, 2017

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Submitted: August 18, 2017



Let's see another me,

Of one, I cannot be,

Valued by one, hardly,

Every touch, quite deadly.


Leave now, Beast,

Only, another at peace,

Violently breathing

Ending, now is ceased.


Look, it speaks,

Odd, unable to see,

Victim of the tea,

Even so, falls to their knees.


Love, what to be,

Original loving piece,

Values love by each,

Exactly, hated by thee...

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