Curiosity

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I've written a short poem but can't decide which last line is better. Please give an opinion in the comments or any other suggestions.

Submitted: August 21, 2017

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Submitted: August 21, 2017

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You leave your front door

To go and explore

The whole human race

Is heading into space

Constantly trying to find out more

 

OR

 

You leave your front door

To go and explore

The whole human race

Is heading into space

What could it all be for?

 

Which one do you prefer? This is for Something I'm working on so please comment.


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