My wish

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


Let's meet on a lonely night

In a wintery day

When stars are bright

Be my side and stay

Let me be you lover

Only just for one more time

I want to be yours

And wish you to be mine

I want to lean my head on your shoulder

And wish you to hold my hand

Let's make love untill the life end

I want you to kiss me again n again

Because your kiss takes away my all pain

So let's meet on a lonely night

In a wintery day

When the stars are bright

And you be my side and say...


Submitted: August 22, 2017

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Bert Broomberg

Nice poem. Mind that on a winter's day, you cannot see the stars. You can only see them at night. Always be careful to avoid mistakes in logic. Sometimes people claim it is a form of poetic licence, but that's rubbish. Poetry should also stick to what can be made logical to the reader.

Tue, August 22nd, 2017 1:20pm

surbhi@booksie

Okay....thanks ..I like the way you are picking out my mistakes thanks I will improve my mistakes thanks again

Tue, August 22nd, 2017 2:54pm

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