Laughable love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: New Writers wanting Reviews
a short perfect love story that is just to good to be true!

Submitted: August 29, 2017

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03:21 Everyday i wake up beside you in bed it’s like the best morning somebody could ever have, but I’ll pretend like it’s nothing special, I’ll complain about your snoring and you’ll always politely give me the middle finger. We’ll eat breakfast together as a family me you and our dog and I probably will compliment your burned eggs. We’ll get dressed and go out to our favorite coffee shop; you love it because of the outdoor tables, we’ll sit at our favorite table you know the one that allow us to see every passing person; I’ll make fun of every couple slipping by, you’ll make some girly jokes that I’ll never understand but I laugh anyway. Today is my lucky day because it’s sunny outside and your hazel eyes get’s 100 times more beautiful in this weather, so I sit there staring contemplating them and I know you get uncomfortable with me doing this but I’ll continue doing it anyway. As soon as we get to the subway I’ll start eye flirting with the first girl I see waiting for you to notice it and get that entire jealous eye look and that soft hit with those helpless small hands and you’ll even force me to get out on the next stop, I don’t know if you know this but I always do that just to make you angry and nothing more I know too well so it’ll only take me 6 seconds max to make everything okay, I’ll give you that cupcake that I packed earlier in the coffee shop with you noticing it. Finally we’re back home, we’ll order pizza and lay on bed, just when I reach to get my book you’ll say something sarcastic about my taste in books and the fact that I can never understand people just by reading a simple book I’ll respond with a humorous comment about those rubbish romantic novels and the amount of idiotic thoughts it contains. A normal couple would shut the lights say the L word and spoon themselves to sleep, but not us, you always say that word makes things a little tense, deep down I know that it’s not the true answer but I’m afraid from the real answer so I’ll agree and leave it all behind. Sleeping time now and amazingly it only takes you three minutes to fall deeply asleep, it takes me an hour longer because of my overthinking problems; you were the first one to point at it. You’ll always try to find out what keeps me up at night and I’ll always come up with a story that you know I’m lying about. I’ll never tell you that what keeps me up at night is that I find hard to believe this perfect relationship we’re having, I’m terrified from the thought that the first fight that we’ll have will be our last or the first problem that’ll come up in our face will tear us apart, but then I remember how you always fight for our relationship even if you try harder to hide the fact that you care and I’m just glad that I’m not alone.


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