This isn't real. The life that you know is a lie. Step into the real world and see where it takes you. The Digital Record of Reality starts here.
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Submitted: September 27, 2017
Submitted: September 27, 2017
Submitted: September 27, 2017
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Recent Comments
First person to shelf this is AWESOME!!! They will be permitted to ask one question about the book and be guaranteed an answer, no matter how spoiler-y, but I won't answer a question like "How does the book end?" or "What is the entire plot?"
Amazing book! Great plot, and a writing style that sticks with you.
Great start, it hooks the reader into wondering exactly what it is that he's up to. It has me wondering who he is and why you say he isn't real. And they aren't real - You could be talking about anyone, anything - It's a great way to pull in the reader. I like this start and I will read more :) I like the writing style too - short, snappy and attention-demanding. Keep it up!
Never read that fast before. Great!
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Hey, thanks! I'm glad that you commented! You know, it would REALLY help me out if you shelfed it, or maybe even just liked my book, but I'm glad that you liked it! Thanks!
Powerful start, with a yummy beginning, shrouded in mystery. I like the aggressiveness of the character, determination to finish what was started. Great start!
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Yes! Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes! Thank you SOO much for reviewing! It really helps me out! Like, a lot! I'm glad you like it! If you really like it, would you shelf it for me? That would be a HUUUUUUGE help!
-Yours truly, the 51st element
An interesting and wonderful prologue. It is a little short but it gets your point across. It obviously about a boy who is upset at the world and feels invisible so in aggressive way gets revenge. I do hope that I get to learn more about this mysterious main character in future chapter like what exactly set him off and perhaps his name.
Curious, a vague beginning. I like it. Clearly our "protagonist" Is determined to do something to make himself real. You did a good job displaying his determination and I found some lines interesting as they hint into possible motive for this goal. But all I can do is speculate at this point now I must read on.
Curious, a vague beginning. I like it. Clearly our "protagonist" Is determined to do something to make himself real. You did a good job displaying his determination and I found some lines interesting as they hint into possible motive for this goal. But all I can do is speculate at this point now I must read on.
To everyone who's left a comment that I haven't replied to:
THANK YOU SO MUCH! I can't express how much I love this feedback. Because of your encouragement, support, and criticism, I am going to be COMPLETELY done editing all 19 chapters of the book in a matter of weeks. I couldn't have done any of this without you. Also, I can't reply to you individually because I can't find the button.
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