Cloak of White

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic


It's a short little poem I wrote and I'm just looking for feedback on my writing! Thank you!

Submitted: September 28, 2017

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She must have the mind of a king

 

Light hair dazzled with snowflakes

White meant purity

But a queen was without such intentions

 

She scolded her men,

White fur cape draped upon her shoulders

Her eyes piercing cold rather than a warm ocean

 

May a queen be anything but innocent

White hiding her imperfections and ideals

Tears stained the steps below her throne

 

A queen

Or rather a tyrant

Dressed in such a color for persuasion

Rather than goodness

 

Nothing could match her power

The words she used upon the people

Ones that couldn’t be taken back

 

With her cloak of white

This queen was much worse than any enemy of war

 

Her gloves stained red

And cape leaving a trail behind

As she heads to her crystal throne

Once more


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