Cloak of White

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic

It's a short little poem I wrote and I'm just looking for feedback on my writing! Thank you!

Submitted: September 28, 2017

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Submitted: September 28, 2017



She must have the mind of a king


Light hair dazzled with snowflakes

White meant purity

But a queen was without such intentions


She scolded her men,

White fur cape draped upon her shoulders

Her eyes piercing cold rather than a warm ocean


May a queen be anything but innocent

White hiding her imperfections and ideals

Tears stained the steps below her throne


A queen

Or rather a tyrant

Dressed in such a color for persuasion

Rather than goodness


Nothing could match her power

The words she used upon the people

Ones that couldn’t be taken back


With her cloak of white

This queen was much worse than any enemy of war


Her gloves stained red

And cape leaving a trail behind

As she heads to her crystal throne

Once more

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