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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic

A big Car chase. Mark is trying to catch assassin but someone was wearing the assassin suit to trick mark.





Jimmy: Thanks.

Mark: Next mission is to save Mathw right?.

Aaron: Ok sir we have ok sir we have to wait for tomorrow. Zaky: That day. Mark: Lets do this. everyone: ok sir.

Mark: Get in the car quick!. (drives to HQ building).( Zaky: outside the HQ building). Mark: i will spy on him with my binoculars i will tell when he goes in the HQ building.

Jimmy: Copy that.

Mark: He is going in make a move!.

Jimmy: ok sir everyone make a move! now.Mark: he has mathw!.

Mark: he is getting,  mathw in the car, everyone get out of there hiding place. (everyone comes out from there hiding places). mark: get in the car quick!. (everyone gets in the car). mark: reporting chasing a red car base plate 3571, jbm kia car.

Aaron: wait i will send a picture of the car. (Aaron takes picture of the car). (Aaron sends a picture of the car to police). police okay its this car. mark: yes we are chasing it right now.

 Mark: he is getting out from his car. (Mark Jimmy and Aaron Jack gets out from there car). Jimmy i see him shoot him. (shooting). (shooting). (shooting). Mark: he is going there.

Zaky: Now i have lead you tomy trap, (laughs). mark: whats so funny!?. zaky: it was,nt any assassin, you think we can,t hack we hacked, your email, then we saw the assassin eivdence so we change the plan, i was wearing the assassin suit and, you thought i was the assassin.(dave laughs). zaky: beat the hack out of them you what iam saying hack get it. (kicks). (punchs). (kicks). (punchs). (ground house kick). zaky: bye. mark: no more byes chase him. mark: he is getting away!. jimmy: lets use gps i throwed gps tacker on zaky, damnit they disabled it.

Mark; Lets see where is mathw.

Mathw:  I'm here thanks for saving me guys.

Mark: Lets put these prisoners in there cells. (drives to police station) zaky: in the police station. Aaron: he is there. mark: cheif.

Cheif: yes mark.

Mark: If introgat these prisoner then might lead us to, there base. cheif: ok show the picture of this memebers. mark: ok. (mark shows cheif picture of zaky). this is zaky.(mark shows the picture of dave). mark: this is dave. (mark shows the picture of john). cheif: ok introgat those prisoners. (mark takes 3 prisoners to introgat area). zaky: in the introgat area. mark: do then have wifes. prisoners: yes. mark: do then have a base. prisoners: yes and its underground. mark: who killed mia. prisoners: zaky!. (mark locks door). mark: the guy we arrested was not the murder of ms mia. aron: ok sir go tell he is not the killer of ms mia. mark:i will go tell him. mark: cheif!. cheif: yes?. mark: the killer of ms mia is zaky. mark: sir we need a plan we have to arrest zaky. cheif: ok. mark: cheif we need more eivdence. cheif come here our computer will help us find more eivdence. aron: cheif the computer is being hacked!. cheif: what!. mark: how the hell we will find eivdence now zaky: that night.cheif its night everyone go to there home. everyone:ok cheif. (drives to home). kate hi honey you look tried sweet heart i was in la, ok i have cooked chicken.

mark: where is she?

Kate: Oh graey, graey.

Graey: Hello dad.

Mark: Hi graey.

Graey: Dad i was in L.A. with mom.

mark: oh ok how was L.A.. 

To be continue in chapter 3



Submitted: October 15, 2017

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Muneeb Sohail

Hi ,
I would like you to read my new chapter 2." The Killer " and provide your valuable comments.

If this like you more please do share your fans and friends.

have a nice day


Sun, October 15th, 2017 11:05am



Fri, December 1st, 2017 11:32am


Hi aleeha Thanks

Fri, December 1st, 2017 3:44am


Very interesting, good script!

Sat, December 2nd, 2017 12:45am

Samantha J. Crowther

I like it. Your style is very interesting in a good way. Nice job!

Thu, December 7th, 2017 3:54am


Thanks for your comment..I am glad you like my story..keep reading my story.

Thu, December 7th, 2017 2:09am

Kathrina Csernis

This was really good as well, I am enjoying it. I think though if you were to mark what chapter it is in the title will help a lot, it took me a while to find which one I hadn't read yet lol

Tue, December 12th, 2017 9:25pm


Hi sis,
I love reading & writing stories. I'm 10 years old, thanks for point out my mistake. :)

Tue, December 12th, 2017 3:20pm


Wow! I liked it! Usually I don't like such a way of writing but after reading this, my impression of plays and scripts totally changed! Great work dude!

Tue, December 26th, 2017 9:09am


Thank you for reading

Tue, December 26th, 2017 1:58am

Madame Hellshadow

I think that your story could be made into a television series. You should try to get your story published once its finished.

Mon, January 1st, 2018 12:11pm


Thank you for your advise

Mon, January 1st, 2018 4:16am

Maddie Hall

Only just seen your comment on my page - your book is so creative - i absolutely loved it! I also have book in working progress and i would love some feedback ! Thanks

Tue, October 30th, 2018 11:28am

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