May I make you my poem?
Letting the words… freely roam
From the lashes of my eyes as start
To the silken white page of your heart!
Letting the water of my tears scribble
On your lustrous page, letting them dribble!
The blot they leave… would speak
In your heart all that would tweak!
If you were the poem I write
It would never end to agony’s plight!
Such a romantic poetry would it be and quixotic
That no one can have this Muse, so hypnotic!
Will you be the real definition of healings?
Spontaneous flow of powerful feelings!
Leave Byron, leave Shelley and company
I’ll create our own melody, our symphony!
Allow me make you the title of my writings
You will see in your heart the world of lightings!
Shush shush… come and join, let it be
You are my poem and MY’s ME!
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Such a romantic gesture to the person you love, and being the name of a loved one's poetry is such a beautiful feeling. You write this poem with that romance in mind, and your words are everlasting eternity. Rehmat you know how to move emotions with your writing, and that makes you quite extraordinary my dearest love. I love the penultimate verse, where the healing of a heart can become a heart with feelings. It's a beautiful rhyme, and a beautiful way of emotional imagery. And with that music can be composed to create a lullaby, or a symphony for the orchestra. So moving Rehmat, and while my heart is more cold than warm, make me your poem, because my heart has so many meanings to the words you write. Beautiful poetry love!
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OH why thank you so much my dearest friend!!! It means a lot!
"Spontaneous flow of powerful feelings", what a powerful line! Love it!
SB x
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thank you!
Oh this warmed up my heart:) so tender
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really that's cool sweety
Reading that gave me a good feeling so it must have been good cause I'm a miserable sod lol... good read T thank you for sharing .
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Hah sweet! thank you dear
I love everything about this! I love the sentiment, the rhyming, the romance, & the caring, most especially it's "Feel"!
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Thank you so much but you forgot to read 'It's time to say goodbye'! I hope you'll love it more lol
NOBODY makes me like something, Reymat, it just so happens that I think this is excellent!
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Aww!! Thanks Mike!
Sorry, I misread the title, bummer for us both!
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Haha
Beautifully done, Rehmat!
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thank you Hully dear
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