My Teacher, Death

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic


The worst class unknowingly had the Grim reaper as their teacher

Table of Contents

Students of 3-f


Alright, so this is just going to show the students and why not give them theme songs like James Roberts XD
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Chapter I

          It was a new school year and one student was frowning. While everyone wa... Read Chapter

Chapter II

Erick almost taught everyone but there were still some students that he hadn’t attended to. He walked towards a ... Read Chapter

Chapter III

  Erick took Victor to the clinic to get him patched up. He waited outside the door with his arms folded and... Read Chapter

Chapter IV

  Blackness. It was an empty space but a conversation is echoing throughout the void.    "... Read Chapter

High school brawl!!

  It was finally time to go home. Katejina and Emerald were the first to go and completely forgot about taking Victor ... Read Chapter

Darryl's love

                The bell rang and it was time... Read Chapter

Darryl's love pt. 2

  Darryl stood there, sad and ready to give up. He felt down and wanted to give up after hearing Joseph's story. He felt like no... Read Chapter

Darryl's love pt. 2 (the sillier ending)


I couldn't think of a way to make this sad so why not just make it funnier. Least that's what I think is going to happen.
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Emerald's determination

      Emerald finally opened her eyes. The sigh of relief from all of her classmates soon followed. ... Read Chapter

Emerald's determination pt.2

      "what?" Luke asks, he thought that Emerald already knew the answer.   "... Read Chapter

Emerald's determination pt.3

  The next day and Emerald immediately notices that Erick and Luke were inside the classroom. Luke was showing to Erick the comp... Read Chapter

Midterms


A little bit of a timeskip
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Katejina's freedom

"yes you can trust me!" Emerald said, they didn't leave the room. Katejina was quietly crying when Emerald saw her. "please, te... Read Chapter

Katejina's freedom pt.2

    It was the weekends and what better way of spending it than spending time with your teacher!&nb... Read Chapter

Audrey's secret


Ok so I edited part 2 of Emerald's determination because of this chapter, to be specific the part where Darryl and Joseph went to Audrey's house because it kinda contradicts this chapter. :)
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Audrey's secret part 2


This is an experiment. I plan to put alternate endings to the missions but I don't know if I shoul do it haha. Let me know
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Audrey's secret pt.2

  Tuesday, dismissal.   Joseph, Audrey, Jackson, and Darryl were at the faculty talking with Erick. Erick wore a fr... Read Chapter

Richard's heritage

          Wednesday, after Audrey's mission   Richard, while on his w... Read Chapter

The substitute teacher


I did this just for fun! Also to take a break from all the depressing stuff. :)
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The substitute teacher pt. 2

      The boys stalked their teacher at Audrey's house. Audrey had let them in because her parents w... Read Chapter

Richard's heritage pt. 2


This takes place at the same time as part 2 of the substitute teacher
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Richard's heritage/ The substitute teacher pt. 3

    Lucifer prepared a punch which Richard cut his hand. He smirked as he transformed. His transformation was... Read Chapter

Isabella's Confidence.

                Literally the next day after their enco... Read Chapter

Isabella's Confidence pt. 2

  Isabella and company followed Erick, somewhere. None of them had any idea as to where they're going but Jackson and Joseph did... Read Chapter

Sleepover!

Erick was surprised to see Emerald. Why was she with them? Her parent and her brother could not have allowed her to join them, not t... Read Chapter

How to save a life

  "what?" Elise asked, a confused and excited look on her face. She knew that Erick would get attached to them and wou... Read Chapter

1st day

    "he did nothing" Emerald defended, being protective. But it only raised Audrey's suspiscion more. Erick c... Read Chapter

1st day pt.2

  "Luke, where are we going?!" Emerald asked as Luke dragged her to the gate. Luke swayed his eyes from side-to-s... Read Chapter

Boss Fight!!!


This chapter's just dedicated to my sensei, Kathrina! :). So, I used her actual stats, this is it: https://www.booksie.com/529804-the-warlock-grimoire
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The late Christmas special

        "oh thank god you're alive!" I heard someone say. I open my eyes to find a black ha... Read Chapter

Hidden identities

  Luke woke up in Erick's bed with no memory of what happened last night. The last he could remember was Eme... Read Chapter

Erased tragedy, new memories

    Keith's eyes started after hearing what Catherine asked, she really forgot who she was. Kneeling down at ... Read Chapter

Training day

8:00 a.m. Richard quickly woke up from bed, gasping. He hadn't forgotten what he saw last night. Audrey biting hi... Read Chapter

Faust's spy

    "an Elf?" Cassandra asked again as the Elf growled loudly. It then grabbed Cassandra's sword and snapped it in half... Read Chapter

Back to school!

  Cassandra and Erick were walking back home. They both wore smiles. Cassandra wore hers because she helped her grandfather find... Read Chapter

Luke's birthday

    Kathrina walked back home with the thoughts of the event that happened earlier. She didn't know what... Read Chapter

Kathrina goes home

  Luke's birthday soon came to an end and the next day arrived. Luke's closed eyes were twitching and he was struggling to sleep... Read Chapter

The Celestial City

  "mother, can we take some time to the city before we go?" Kathrina asked, looking up at Ariana. She frowned but she ... Read Chapter

The Castle

    3-f soon went back to the massive circle outside the city, where their carriage awaited them. Ryan, Freya, Victor, ... Read Chapter

One day more

The white smoke soon disappeared and he found himself in front of a woman with long crimson hair and green eyed.  Erick fr... Read Chapter

The Master Dragon

Luke woke up with slight dizziness in his head. He looked to his right and saw his horse lyding down on the grassy gr... Read Chapter

Condolence


Title by Raniel aka Blankly-Dreaming
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The Call of the throne

Kathrina woke up from her elegant queen size bed, sitting up and looking at her own room. It was bigger than any of the bed rooms. There ... Read Chapter

The battle comes to an end

Elijah dropped the kids safely to a wall then looked at Erick. He nodded then glared at the Dopplegangers as they rus... Read Chapter

Their bodies are gone?!

Morning soon arrive and Joseph finally reverted to his human form. He opened his eyes, his memory of last night was a... Read Chapter

A plan of escape

  Ariana walked the golden hallways hastily, an angered look on her face. She was looking straight to a pair of golden... Read Chapter

The Night of Escape

Elijah and everyone went back to Cassandra’s room, awaiting for night. But it was only the three o’ clo... Read Chapter

Death comes to the rescue

“Audrey” Erick said, a shocked look on his face as he stared at Audrey who was sitting in front of him, wearing a smile. ... Read Chapter

Epilogue

“Kathrina!” Elijah called, approaching Kathrina and wrapping his arms around her. She looked up and smi... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments

Kathrina Csernis

Thought I'd come back and read these first chapters that i missed cx

The start is great, explaining the situation that happened made me wonder, really hooks the reader. Theres a lot of character development here and its good to start off with some. But kinda like how its been for my characters, after you introduce them, you seem to neglect them slightly, but thats a common issue with having quite a few main characters. It works, though!

I'm liking how you explained the teacher as well :)

Amazing start, from what I've already read, I'm really liking this story cx

Wed, November 8th, 2017 9:51pm

Author
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Hey! :) haha yeah, I kinda do that. I'm glad you liked the first part of the story :)

Wed, November 8th, 2017 10:42pm

Blankly-Dreaming

I really enjoyed this.

The characters are great and the story.The story kinda reminds me of one of my favorite animes (Im an anime fan, hehe). Although it has the same like, topic. This one has its own uniqueness.

I'm really interested on what will happen to their teacher since his the grim reaper. I also like that aspect of having death as the teacher, its sort of refreshing not seeing him as a dark and deathly fiend.

Question, will you put a tear jerking scene. I hope there is. I see possible events that can make me cry my eyes out. Even if there isn't I'm gonna keep reading since I'm already interested.

Sun, November 12th, 2017 1:20pm

Author
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Ha! Yeah I got the inspiration from assassination classroom if that's the anime you're talking about. I'm also an anime fan so you can already guess why I got the inspiration.

Yeah death being evil is kinda overrated and a bit wrong. He's just your escort to the next realm.

and as for the question, maybe. I'm thinking twice if I want to put the ending I'm planning. Just keep updated haha ;)

Anyways I'm glad you liked it. And I'm happy to know that you're going to keep reading

Sun, November 12th, 2017 5:25am

scatteredsquirrel

Great first chapter:) You did a nice job introducing the students and teacher.
One thing I would keep in mind though is your sentence variation- They felt a choppy to read. I recommend discovering new ways to begin your sentences and differing the lengths of each sentence. Keep up the good work!
Happy writing!!

Sun, November 12th, 2017 7:07pm

Author
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Hey! Thanks for the advice, I'll keep it mind and I'll try to rework it.

Sun, November 12th, 2017 3:25pm

SugaFire

so I came back, and I thought this was pretty alright, but considering I'm an action girl, I found it a little bit slow. But it's great for it's genre. However, it could use a little more comedy. I'll read the rest so I can get to know Erik's darker ( I mean deeper, haha) side a little better.

Wed, November 22nd, 2017 11:24pm

Author
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Hey! Yeah the first five chapters takes place in one day, maybe that's why it's a little bit slow. I'm glad you're going to read it more. :)

Wed, November 22nd, 2017 3:51pm

K.Essler

Man that is harsh. All the faculty has given up on this class and deemed everyone in the class hopeless lol. This is kind of interesting, I am wondering where you will be going with this.

So all the students just don't feel like learning because the stuff they are learning isn't interesting. I can believe that, alot of stuff in school is quite boring. So to get them more focused on the stuff they don't want to learn he is teaching them about the stuff they want to learn.

Also he is death as well. I never expected death to want to teach people. That's kind of interesting. I wonder if one of them is goi nnng to find out what he is.

Mon, December 11th, 2017 12:28am

Author
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Yeah it is harsh. I guess you'll just hage to keep reading this Rollercoaster of a book to find out.

Haha yeah, I wanted these kids to not feel like delinquents or dumb, I wanted a different reason because if I didn't it will look similar to a familiar anime. And yeah, a lot of stuff in school are boring. Only once a week though haha.

Yep he is haha. Yeah, no one will because he's death haha. Who knows if one of them will.

Sun, December 10th, 2017 11:02pm

れっくる

Reminds me of Classroom of the Elite with those bunch of people packed in a class. Thanks for the hard work!

Thu, December 28th, 2017 12:52pm

Author
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I was actually thinking of assassination classroom when writing this but okay, I'm glad you read it!

Thu, December 28th, 2017 4:56am

Muneeb Sohail

i really like the starting of this student "Luke" he was not uninterested in learning things in school that he is like a guy that is bored of school, and i also i like Erick the teacher he is sweet and kind and really he good with his student, also i like Emerald he or she is really kind with his or her teacher, and i also i like Darry Fong he is friendly with Luke and he is cool, i don't who can be the reaper but don't spoil for me because i am having reading this story, keep up the good work, and also i know you have completed this story but make a part two of this story i will read that i will updated so when you make story's i will read them :)

Thu, December 28th, 2017 1:56pm

Author
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Hey! I'm glad you liked it and no I haven't finished this story yet and okay, but he's right there, the grim reaper's right there. But anyway, I'm glad you'll read it! Thanks for reading :)

Thu, December 28th, 2017 6:01am

S. Rasmussen

A little bit of verb trouble throughout the story. Please don't mix present and past tense in one paragraph. I would suggest you install Grammarly and fix it that way.

Else? Erick is an interesting character

Liked the chapter

Fri, December 29th, 2017 2:20pm

Author
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Oh haha, yeah that's kind of my problem, I'll rework that soon if I ever find the time. I'm glad you liked it though.

Fri, December 29th, 2017 6:22am

J. R. Merrick

I like the start to this story. You had a lot of good character development and the premise itself is very interesting. I like how death is not portrayed as the stereotypical skeleton in a cloak. He actually seems to care about the students, unless he has ulterior motives. I can see this story going in many different directions. Good job!

Thu, January 25th, 2018 12:30am

Author
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I'm glad you liked it and yeah that's me, I like putting twists into created elements. Maybe so maybe not, maybe he does have ulterior motives or maybe he's just bored.

Thu, January 25th, 2018 11:59pm

AnikanDarkness

I have arrived... and now I shall read this book from beginning to end cuz like yay!

Okay so you introduced three characters so far... Luke Shadows (just hearing someone say Mr Shadows is just funny) Darryl Fong (For some reason I keep thinking of TWD Daryl) and this Emerald Winters person... (they seem cool)

Still so many characters... considering the fact that the grim reaper is on the cover i'm assuming someone is gunna die at some point so yay!

Okay so is Erick death? He had a scythe so is planning to kill the students are something? Omigod the slaughtering of an entire class would be fun!

So far this seems very interesting >~

Fri, February 2nd, 2018 12:50pm

Author
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Yay! lol

Yes, Luke the asshole, Darryl the..guy, and Emerald the sleepy-head.

Yes there are so many characters and they will die, at some point.

Yes Erick is death and maybe ;) and hmm, that did happen at one point, sorta.

Yay, It's interesting lol

Fri, February 2nd, 2018 5:05am

MARIA KURENAI SHINOHARA

It's kinda rude that they put all the bad students in the same class. It's very injustice. And gave them only one teacher for all subjects.
I didn't understand that why did Luke thought that the teacher is a professional. Isn't every teacher a professional?
I liked Emerald as well. But cleaning the classroom is a duty of every student. Why did he need to treat her for that. But still she is weird to text her teacher late at night. Only to tell him that he would be a good teacher.

But I think that the teacher is the angel that takes our souls after we die. Or maybe a devil. But I think he really is a nice teacher.

Sat, February 24th, 2018 9:38am

Author
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It is rude yes but hey, what's the school going to do if the teacher's all gave up on them? Expell them? Kick them out? It's the least terrible thing they could do.

What I meant by that is like he looked like he had been teaching for so long since there are those teachers that are just new and or a student teacher.

Emerald's weird and Erick treated her just to show that he's a nice person and not like most of their teachers.

Hmm, Erick is the grim reaper if it wasn't obvious at this point.

Sat, February 24th, 2018 2:44am

ShadaStorm120

This is a very interesting concept. I just wonder, how do you plan on doing so many students. It's a whole classroom of people, people, we, as the reader, have to remember. Usually, I'd say it's not a good idea to have so much characters, because it's hard to juggle between them or make them all memorable in their own way. It will take me awhile to get familiar with all these characters, so I can't say how I feel about any of them yet. So far, the teacher stands out the most though, mostly because of his admirable goals on making these students better themselves, and the fact he took a soul right there. I admit, it was quite a straight forward way of showing he was the grim reaper, and I would have liked some mysterious things and slowly figure it out, because, now we know he's the reaper, but have to wait for the students to figure it out something we already know. I also feel parts of this story isn't really realistic, but I suppose, maybe your school works differently from mine. I always thought teachers weren't meant to get friendly with their students, like take them out someplace for their help, haha. That's just one of the things I noticed though. But anyway, so far, you've done a good job at introducing some of the important characters in this story, and I wonder how this story will progress :) great job so far.

Sun, April 1st, 2018 7:30pm

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Yeah the abundance of characters is always the one that people will immediately ask me how to handle it. What I just did was basically give them different quirks but I won't say much. I think, so far, that most of the readers weren't confused as to who the characters are.

Oh right, that whole he's a reaper thing yeah I pointed it out early because why not. It's like those superheroes who you already know their identity and the people in that universe still hasn't.

Also yeah teacher's can't get attach to their students but there's a reason why he's being so friendly to them. And yeah a lot of unrealistic things but I'm really not going for that. Trust me, you'll see more unrealistic things later haha.

Thanks and I hope you like what happens in the next few chapters

Sun, April 1st, 2018 8:12pm

dominiko

Good start. I liked that the teacher Erick actually decided to go a different route teaching students by basing it off of their likes. I also like that he was a reaper, but I actually didn't think that it would happen in the first chapter, you know. It would have been a cool concept to leave little hints and let the reader figure it out. Either way though, you left enough info to want me to keep reading and find out what happened. I find it hard to believe the reaper just wants to teach students and be friendly so I believe he has a more diabolical plan for the students later on. Nice job and nice chapter.

Mon, April 9th, 2018 5:52pm

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Yeah well he needed their trusts. Yeah I know but like I guess I wanted it already so the fun of him trying to hide his identity is there. And yay, hope you like what happens next and hmm maybe he does or maybe not, it is just the first chapter. Thanks!

Mon, April 9th, 2018 3:40pm

Moony

This seems promising and interesting. I see a couple issues but this is the first chapter so who cares. I think this has real potential. (That its probably already reached, I'm pretty late...) Anyways I wonder where this will go.

I wish I had a teacher like this. But I'm glad Erick is their teacher and can help them move past why they are in the "hopeless" class. A "hopeless" class that people gave up on is an interesting concept actually.

Sun, July 29th, 2018 1:53pm

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Yay and sorry but you'll see quite a few issues with the beginning of the story. I advise you ignore them because I do know where the issues are and well, laziness is a thing so yeah.

Yes, Erick is apparently the best teacher ever. I hope you'll like the story :)

Sun, July 29th, 2018 7:14am

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