My Teacher, Death

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Chapter 13 (v.2) - Katejina's freedom (alt. ending)

Submitted: November 20, 2017

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Submitted: November 20, 2017



"yes you can trust me!" Emerald said, they didn't leave the room. Katejina was quietly crying when Emerald saw her. "please, tell me what's wrong?" she pleaded.


"I... want to be like you!" she said, Emerald thought she mean as smart as her. 


"like me?" she asks pointing to herself. "you can be smarter than me!" she yelled.


"NO! Not that!" she cried, wiping her tears. "I wanna be an ordinary girl like you" she said, her tears went back.


"why?" Emerald asks, she was about to cry as well.


"let me tell you a story" Katejina said, Emerald takes a seat. She wipes her tears and said:


When I was little, my aunts and uncles have always shaped my life. I never had control of my life, I'm supposed to follow everything they say. They molded me to become the perfect girl. They even enrolled me for martial arts when I was 5.


Katejina was little and is practicing martial arts on a school. Her perfomance was sloppy which causes her aunts and uncles to glare at her. She ignored it since she didn't know she was sloppy.  Her coach shouts at her which causes her to act better. 


And everytime I was bad at something, heh! Crack the whip! Ten lashings across the ass! :(


The *crack* of a whip can be heard across Katejina's house. Katejina's cries can also be heard, louder than the whip. She pleaded for her uncle to stop but only resulted in more scolding. The whip became much more powerful after Katejina's plea. Her mother can only watch, she was powerless.


Where's your mom? Why didn't she save you?


Thing is, as much as she wants to, she can't. We lived in our grandmother's house and there are rules. One of the rules is she can't intervene wihen I'm being punished.


Katejina cries as her mother hugs her. It was after the lashing and her mother tries her best to comfort her. Katejina wanted to run away but her mother said she can't because they don't have enough money to move. Katejina quietly cried since his uncle yelled for her to sleep.


I learned from that mistake, and I continued to be their obedient niece. Until I turned into a teenager. I became rebellious. I started going down to the lower sections but as you guess, my aunts and uncles aren't happy with that. They gave me one final chance to be the perfect girl. I had to at least be on the top five on midterms or else we're going to be kicked out of their house.




"now you know my story!" Katejina said, a smile on her face since she felt like a weight has been lifted by telling her story. Most of her tears have been wiped though there are still some left, about to fall from her eyes


"that's so sad!" Audrey said, appearing before them.


"Audrey? Why are you here?" Emerald asks, confused as to why she's right in front of them. 


"I overheard you guys and thought to hear the entire story" she replied, having a sad look on her face. "can I ask what's your mission?" she asks.


"AUDREY!" Emerald yelled.


"sorry" Audrey apologized, looking down at the ground.


"nah, it's okay!" Katejina said, wiping the remaining tears left on her eyes. "my mission is to be free from my uncle and aunt and I guess it's about to be complete" she said, looking down as tears once again fell from her eyes. 


"hey, don't cry!" Audrey said, bending over to Katejina. "if Professor Erick helped out Darryl and Emerald on their mission, then he'll helped you out as well"


"speak of the devil" Audrey said as he looks at Erick who casually enters the classroom. He noticed Katejina crying and hurried to her. 


"why are you crying?" Erick asks. Erick's eyes widen. He began seeing visions. Katejina hanging herself and ultimately killing herself. 


"she failed to reach her aunts and uncles' expecations and now she's going to be kicked out" Emerald explained. She can see Erick's eyes full of fright and anger. "sir?" she called


"Let me talk to your aunts and uncles!" Erick requested, grabbing Katejina's shoulder. His voice was different. Instead of being calm and cool, he was panicky and worried. 


"okay, sir!" Katejina said. 


Erick sighs "Good! I'll meet you later after school" he said, letting go of Katejina's shoulders.


"sir!" Emerald and Audrey both shout.




"we... to join you" they said, looking nervously at each other. Erick smiles and nods. 




The bell rang and class resumes. It was a normal day at calss except when Erick gave a quiz. Emerald and Luke got a perfect score, Katejina had one mistake. It wasn't long until dismissal. KAtejina and co. waited for Erick at the convenience store where the boys hang out. They were surprised to see them there.


"why aren't you at home yet?" he asks, acting like a parent.


"I can't go home right now" Emerald said, looking worried "not when there's a friend in need of help" she continued, turning her head to the worried and scared Katejina. 


"what happened?" Luke asks, now worried about Katejina


"Katejina will be kicked out of her house by her aunts and uncles since she didn't make it to the top five" Emerald said, she was almost to the point of crying. Luke gasps, how could guardians be this cruel to their daughter? "the Prof. has volunteered to talk to her guardians, so will be heading there soon" she continued. Luke wiped the tears on her eyes.


"I'll come with you!" he said. Emerald was about to say no but when she gazed at Luke's eyes, she knew she can't say no. She nods, agreeing that Luke should come. Suddenly, the rest of the boys noticed the commotion and they also wanted to join. They were overwhelmed by the sheer amount of support from their classmates. They agreed to go to Katejina's house. Once Erick arrived, they waste no time going to Katejina's house.


Erick gave a knock on the door, Katejina by her side. Her aunt opens it and Erick started conversing with her. Though they can only hear mumbling, they can hear Erick's voice rising. He was getting angry and Katejina was getting scared.


"yo, what's happening there?" Jackson asks, worried at the sound of Erick's voice.


"teach's getting angry!" Joseph answered, stepping forward but was stopped by Audrey. She held tightly on Joseph's arm. He turns his head and she saw a sad Audrey, shaking her head. Joseph sighs and steps back.


"have you ever seen the Prof. this way before?" Luke asks Emerald.


"no! Not once" Emerald said, looking really worried as she gazed at Erick.


"no!" Katejina's aunt said. Katejina was hiding behind Erick while her mother was behind Katejina's aunt and uncle. "Katejina had one chance and she failed it" she continued, increasing Erick's anger.


"So... this is what adults have become" Erick said quietly, his words caught the attention of the aunt and uncle.


"I'm sorry but, what did you just say?" she asks as Erick grits his teeth and his hands formed fists. His eyes were covered by his hair but it suddenly glowed red.


"WHAT KIND OF GUARDIANS ARE YOU?!!!" he furiously asks as a deathly vibe begins to envelope their house. Her aunt and uncle hesitates to answer as Erick brought about his rage. "YOU"RE SUPPOSED TO GUARDIANS BUT YOU ACT MORE LIKE MASTERS OF A SLAVE!!!" he continued as he tries to resist transforming. Katejina saw something in Erick, a father!


Luke and Joseph immediately took a step forward but was stopped by both Emerald and Audrey.


"let us go! He's getting really pissed and I don't think that's good" Joseph said, pulling his arm that Audrey has wrapped herself around. Joseph sees that it's pointless to talk to Audrey and just look at the scene. He looks at the boys and gave a nod. 


They all hurried to stop Erick. Since there were only three girls, they couldn't stop all of the boys. The boys grabbed Erick by the arms and legs as they try to stop him from gutting Katejina's guardians. 


"call the police!" the aunt yelled.


"Sure call them, so that we both can go to prison!" Erick yelled as he was pulled back by his students. The uncle hesitates since Erick may complain as well about what they were doing with Katejina. 


"sir, calm down!" Victor said, pulling Erick's right arm along with Jackson.


"how is he this resilient?" Richard asks as he pulls Erick's left leg. 


"no idea!" Ben replied as he pulls Erick's neck.  They are essentially pulling him down but Erick was far too resilient to be put down. He pushes himself back up whenever the boys are close to pinning him down. 


The aunt grabbed Katejina's arm and said "get inside, now!" she commanded. Even at a time like this, she still has the tendency to order her around. She resists as her aunt pulls her. Her aunt's grip was tight and so she was pulled back to the house.


"KATEJINA!" Luke yelled, running towards the door. But before he could even reach it, the door slammed shut and Katejina was trapped inside the house.


Erick got a lot angrier, shouting "GIVE HER BACK!!" but no one responded. Just a few seconds later and Katejina went back outside, a smile on her face.


"it's okay now! My aunts and uncles promised that they would be kinder to me from now on" she lied. Everyone knew she was lying, that forced smile, those eyes that are trying to hold her tears, she was forced to do this by her aunt and uncle.


"no, it's not!" Luke yelled "you're not okay! Get out of there now befo-"




Katejina screamed as Luke dropped to the floor, everyone looked at him. He had a bullet to his chest. Erick looked back at the house and saw a crazy aunt with a shotgun. 


"RUN!" Erick shouts, knowng that this aunt had gone crazy. Everyone started to run except for the girls, Joseph and Darryl had to grab them. Erick grabbed Luke before running away, Erick gasped as his soul started coming out of his chest. Katejina cried as her aunt pulls her back into the house. 


"No, no , no , no!" Erick cried, seeing Luke's soul approaching him. He didn't want Luke to die yet, he still had a mission. He teleported out of there and back into the house to revive him but it was too late, he saw Luke's spirit in the afterlife. Erick stood up, tears in his eyes as he goes into the afterlife to guide Luke to heaven.


A few weeks later.


Emerald approached Erick with a sad look. Erick knew she had bad news to say and he almost didn't want to hear it, but he has to.


"Tell me the bad news" Erick said with a sigh. Emerald was a little reluctant at first but then pulled out her phone.


"Last week: Katejina Light comitted suicide. She couldn't take the pressure and severe punishment her aunts and uncles gave her. This pushed Audrey and me to call the police and arrest the aunt and uncle. In the end, they were given the justice they deserved and are now spending their days in prison. As for Luke shadows, he was buried at the national cemetary. No family member cmae to visit him, even at his funeral" Emerald said. Erick wasn't present during the funeral, he was busy. Hearing that, he was saddened. 


"Don't cry" Erick said, he knew that Emerald was sweliing up tears in her eyes as she read. Emerald hugged Erick as she cry. Two people she cared about passed away. Erick gasped, his world turning black and seeing the horrific deaths of Emerald. Too horific that I don't want to describe it.


Mission failed

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