Chapter 16: Audrey's secret pt.2

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

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Tuesday, dismissal.


Joseph, Audrey, Jackson, and Darryl were at the faculty talking with Erick. Erick wore a frown as they explain Audrey's situation. He knew it was coming but he didn't expect it to be soon. 


"I see. So it's her turn now" Erick said, thinking that this might be hard. "Alright. I'll go to your house by 6:00 pm. Until then, don't do anything stupid!" Erick said. They all nod and left the faculty. Erick sighs, he really wanted to have Audrey be the final mission. He hold both hands and closed them to pray. 


"Help me out here. This is the hardest mission out of all of them." he prayed his eyes closed and his head down. "If these kids truly can change the cycle then please, help me out" he continued. He releases both hands and sighed. He went back to his normal work afterwards. 


As he leaves the school, a whisper in the air said "Yosovion". This must be God's help. Erick realized it and looks around to check if there's people around him. The area was clear. A black smoke suddenly surrounds Erick. After a while, it disappeared and so did Erick.


He was dropped into a snowy mountain. He summons his black cloak to protect him from the weather, being human does have it's disadvantages. He looks around until he can see a small light from a distance. Using his speed, he approaches it rather quickly. It was a small lodge. He knocks the door. A woman opens it with a perplexed face.


"oh my god, Alexander! Get this man a jacket!" the woman yelled her perplexed look became a worried look. "get inside, it's cold out there!" she said, moving out of the way for Erick to get inside. 


It was warmer inside, a fireplace by the side, a chair and a bookshelf. It felt like home for Erick. He takes off his shoes and the woman gestures for him to take a seat in the chair.  The woman notices that Erick is wearing a suit and nothing like what a hiker would wear.


"pardon me but, why are you wearing a suit?" she asks. Erick looks below and blushes in embarrassment. He can't tell them that he's a teacher.


"Oh!" Erick lied, pretending that he only noticed now that he's wearing a suit. "I am?" he pretended more.


"sir please don't pretend like you don't know!" The woman said, catching Erick's lie. Erick immediately knew that it was Audrey's mom. That smile, the red eyes, and her knack to know if someone lies, it matches Audrey too good. He smiles as he has finally found Audrey's parents.


Meanwhile at Audrey's house.


Richard was the one who decided to accompany her this time. They were searching around her room, trying to find clues as to where her parents will be.


"hey, so what do your parents normally look for?" he asks, as he reads about journal entries about the holy grail and the ark of the covenant. 


"a lot of things, really, but they like looking for cathiolic relics" Audrey replied as she tries to reach a book that was on top of a cabinet. Richard approaches her and find it funny that Audrey was just jumping to get the book. He uses his height to grab it and give it to Audrey.


"maybe this will tell us where they are" Audrey said as she opens the book. He gasps which causes Richard to look at it. He frowns at what he saw. 


"uh, what is that?" Richard asks as he looks at a poorly drawn dinosaur and two people, a man and a woman, fighting the dinosaur. 


"this is...." Audrey said, feeling nervous due to Richard's frown. "my drawing when I was young" she said, flipping through the pages of her book.


"what is that?" Richard asks, seeing a drawing of Audrey's parents on a white mountain finding a book. The book had the devil's face as a cover


"oh, that is...." Audrey said, trying to remember what it is. "I think this is when they went to Yosovion and looked for Judas' book for the bible" Audrey replied. That was too specific but Richard wasn't going to complain. 


"so did they find it?" he asks, Audrey shook her head.


"as far as I know, they didn't" she said with a frown as she gives it to Richard for him to put back to the cabinet.


"when did they started looking for it?" he asks as he places the book on top of the cabinet.


"when I was....six" she realized, her eyes suddenly sparkles.


"we found your parents!" Richard said. Audrey then gave the loudest scream she can produce.


Back in Yosovion.


Before Alexander could even come to bring him a jacket, Erick stood up and walked over to the door.


"where are you going?" the woman asks, walking slightly towards him.


Frowning, he replied "I'm going to take a walk" he quietly said, leaving without hesitation. The woman followed him outside but by the time she got there, Erick was gone.


Audrey's house, 6:00 pm


Audrey and Richard were at the living room, watching TV since they were tired searching her parents' room and cleaning up afterwards when sudenly...




Audrey stood up, expecting Erick, and opened the door. She was surprised to see Erick wearing a jacket and paler than before.


"I've found your parents!" Erick declared, expecting Audrey to be surprised.


Smirking, she replied "Yosovion, right?" she asks. Erick nodded. "come inside, sir" Audrey said, Erick  went in and saw Richard there. 


"okay, so how do we go to Yosovion?" Audrey asks, seeing Ricahrd smirk. 


"the answers, right behind you? Isn't that right?" Richard asks as he glares at  Erick. "dad?" he continued, revealing that he's Erick's niece. Audrey was shocked, he looked at the two back and forth,.


"I... what?  what?!" she said, pulling her hair in confusion.


"I suppose it's only a matter of time before I told you this but, yes! He's my son" Erick replied going next to him. Audrey screamed out loud as she was surprised to not find out that secret.  "And I'm guessing it's about time I reveal myself to you" Erick said, the tone of his voice became sad.


"sir?" Audrey asks, tilting her head.


"As you know, Emerald thinks that I am the grim reaper and she's right" Erick said with a frown. Audrey frowns as well. "Audrey!" he called.




"Promise me that you won't tell anyone, not even Emerald, about my identity!" he said. Audrey nods slowly. Erick suddenly smiles. "Now, come on! You too Richard!" Erick said. They gather to him. Erick places both his hands on one shoulder of each student. They got swirled up in a black cloud, Audrey got scared while Richard smirks.


They were instantaneously back at the mountain, Richard was fine while Audrey was freezing cold. 


"Oh, shit! Forgot to tell you to bring a jacket!" Erick said, placing his robes to Audrey. Audrey found the stench to be vile, like something dead lived inside it. She realized it was Erick's and tries her best to resist it. 


"how...come....Richard....isn't....feeling....cold?" She asked, as she shivers. 


"the cold is slowly dying as it touches me" Richard said with a smile. "you also have 30 minutes before that cloak takes your life" he continued, pointing to Erick's cloak. Audrey shireks.


"WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?! ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME?!!" Audrey asks, but Erick didn't answer. Richard smiles as he sees Erick hesitate to answer.


"maybe!" Richard replied, terrifying Audrey more.


"Enough!" Erick said, silencing the two. "let's go and meet your parents!" he said, walking towards the lodge.


They slowly tread to the lodge, Audrey's heart pounding with excitement. She was finally going to meet them again. It's been far too long but she knows Erick has some kind of reason as to why there here, so she thought to not talk until she was introduced. 


"Richard, wear a cloak" Erick commanded, Richard summons a black cloak. 


They've arrived at the lodge and Erick knocks as usual. The woman from before opens and was surprised to see him with two more people.


"Hi! I've found these two wondering the mountain and they said that they were looking for you" Erick said, he wasn't lying though. They are looking for her. 


"who are they?" the woman asks since their cloaks and robes obscures their faces


Audrey hesitates to answer but when Erick pushed her back, it was her cue to answer. "someone who misses you!" she said with a smile. The woman's eyes widen as she knew that voice.


"Audrey?" she asked. Audrey smiled and removes her cloak, her body became paler due to the cloak, she now truly looks like a vampire. 


She runs to her mother and gave her a hug. Her tears were swelling up in her eyes as she finally hugs her mother, a woman she hasn't seen for 8 years. She cried to her arms saying "I've missed you so much, mother!" she said as she cried happily. 


"I've missed you too!" she replied, hugging her tight.


Alexander came out of the room, hearing Audrey's voice. He dropped the jacket and ran towards them. He hugged both of them, tightly. A smile on their faces as they embraced each other.


Minutes later and they were sitting down on the chairs near the fireplace, alll of them wore jackets as the weather outside got harsher.


"how did you get here?" her mother asked.


"does it matter, Eliza?" Alexander asked, placing his hand on her shoulder. "our daughter came all this way to find us!"


"I guess not" Eliza replied. Erick sighed, he was glad that Alexander was able to persuade Eliza. 


They spent the night inside the lodge. Audrey was having having a coneversation with her parents in their bedroom. Erick and Richard were outside, talking about his student's destinies.


"you're becoming more and more like your mother!" Alexendar said as he pinched Audrey's cheek. He sees the similarities between her and her mother.


"well, I did come from you!" Audrey retorted. Her smile never wore off, how could it wear off? She finally met her parents after 8 years of absence, she was going to cherish this. 


"how's your studies?" Eliza asked


"they've been amazing! I made it to the top 50 during midterm!" she bragged, giggling as her mother patted her head. "and it's all because of my teacher!" she continued.


"that's great to hear!" Eliza replied, slowly she frowned. Audrey looked up to face her mother, she was frowning. Tears swelled up in Eliza's eyes as she tried to not spit out her secret. 


"what's wrong?" Audrey asked, she frowned as well. She can tell her mother's keeping a secret. "is there something I should know?" she asked, seeing her mother wiped the coming tears.


"it's nothing!" she said with a smile."I'm going to get something!"  she continued, leaving them.


"dad!" Audrey called, turning around and facing him. 


"it's nothing" Alexander said. Audrey frowns, knowing tha they're hiding a secret. She stood up and strolled to the door "where are you going?" Alexander asked


Audrey smiled "just going to say thanks to the man!" she lied. Luckily, his dad doesn't have her or her mother's ability to catch a liar so it was easy.


Outside, Audrey heard Richard and Erick's conversation. She only heard the last part of their conversation about their destinies but what came next was something that made her cry.


"they're spirits?" Richard asked. Leaning on the fence outside the lodge. 


"I'm afraid so. See this picture" Erick said with a frown. He revealed to Richard a picture of Audrey with her family. His eyes widen at the sight of the picture. "As you can see, they look exactly the same, they didn't show any sign of age when we met them" he continued. 


Inside the house, Audrey's tears fell. She didn't want to believe it, she can't believe it. Her parents can't be spirits, can they? She goes back to their bedroom just so she can prove them wrong. But when she got there, she gasped. They did looked like they hadn't aged. She walked back to the living room and cried quietly. Erick heard her cry and turned around. He frowns as he gazed at the crying Audrey. He hurried inside to comfort her, Richard followed suit. 


"What's wrong?" he asked as he tried to wrap his arms around her


Audrey scowled at him. "why didn't you tell me?" she asked as smacked his hand away.


"I didn't want you to be sad and besides..." Erick said as he looked up. Audrey looked where Erick was looking and gasps, her parents saw her crying.


Alexander and Eliza gathered around her. "why are you crying?" Alexander asks.


"dad... are you.... dead?" she asks. She didn't want to accept the reality of her parents being dead. She spent too much time finding them. She doesn't want to believe that this is how her mission will end since the others' missions ended happily, why does her mission have to end like this? 


"I'm sorry, Audrey" Alexander said, quietly. Audrey gasped as she hugged her parents while crying out loud. Erick and Richard looked away and went outside, they didn't like seeing Audrey cry like this. Erick wished that he could do something.


"hey!" Richard called, his eyes swelling up with black tears. "pray to God, please! I hate seeing them cry!" he shouted.


"Do you think he'll answer?" he asked, hiding his own tears.


"OF COURSE HE WILL!" Richard shouted. Erick was convinced. He stood out of the house and kneeled down to pray.


"She doesn't deserve this!" he said as his own black tears fell down from his eyes. "She's been too kind and too pure to everyone that she at least deserved a reward for all the things she's done!" he said as he choked from his tears. 


Richard looked back, he can see Audrey's parents aging and become living once more. He wiped his tears as he saw a smile on Audrey's face. God granted her wish after all. Erick walked back up and couldn't help but smile, was he beginning to show feelings for her?


"don't tell me you love her?" Richard asks.


Erick turned away, a smirk and a slight blush on his face "Maybe I do. I've certainly never prayed twice just for her" he said


To be continued

Submitted: November 17, 2017

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a little cheesy

Sun, November 19th, 2017 10:19am


have you read the previous chapters? Maybe that's why you think it's cheesy. :)

Sun, November 19th, 2017 2:30am


Idneiebdeifbuzei...I don't know what to say like..What???.. This chapter made me so sad almost making me cry.

When Audrey met her parents, it makes me all fuzzy inside but when I found out they're really dead, damn, my heart almost broke. I'm glad THE GRIM REAPER mend it and made everyone happy again. Hahaha

Probably one of my favorite chapters. This made me like Audrey even more haha. Vampire. I know she's not she just looks like one haha..Anyways I wonder who's arc's next hahaha. So excited.Good Luck!!!

Sun, November 19th, 2017 10:27am


Hey! I'm glad you liked it. I was going to have an alternative ending where Audrey's parents didn't get revived but.... I like her too much that I wasn't able to write it. I'm surprised you didn't noticed the twist I put. Y'know, Richard's twist. Anyway next arc is a little bit GRIM ;)

Sun, November 19th, 2017 2:43am

Kathrina Csernis

Audrey met her parents?! It made me so sad, they're actually dead though... It made me so sad, poor Audrey :( I'm glad the grim reaper fixed it and made everything a little better, maybe even made them happy but its still super sad, you did a good job with the emotions here, I really feel it :(

This was an amazing chapter, it really did make me cry, I love Audrey. I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Sun, November 19th, 2017 9:18pm


Holy crap, what?! I made you cry?! I don’t actually know what to say hehe. I guess everyone missed that little twist I put because that might give hints as to what the next chapter might be. I guess I should say that I'm glad you liked it.

Ps the alternative ending would possibly break your heart ;)

Sun, November 19th, 2017 2:40pm


I will read the story from the beginning then :)

Tue, November 21st, 2017 12:07pm



Tue, November 21st, 2017 4:20am


Okay this was a much better ending than the other one. He actually brought them back to life, that was pretty awesome. I liked this chapter so much better than the other one. Happy endings are always better, except for maybe the bad guys. The bad guys can have the bad endings lol.

Wed, December 20th, 2017 12:26pm


Yeah, this is better. I might have a dark side on me, but I always prefer happy endings as well. I'm glad you liked it and yeah, let the bad guys have the bad endings XD.

Wed, December 20th, 2017 4:46am

S. Rasmussen

Happy ending. Yay!

Wed, January 3rd, 2018 7:03pm


I'm glad you liked it :)

Wed, January 3rd, 2018 10:39pm



So pretty much everything from the before comment, Audrey is short, Richard has badass hair, AND WHY.

This was like depressing, but less depressing. Like Audrey cannot die, she is amazing. I'm assuming this is the good ending and i'm glad, Audrey finally found her parents. But the completed missions so far.... uh... Emerald the fish, Darryl the thing, Katejina the person and Audrey the derpy vampire.

Just.... why doe. Like you made me die cuz I read the bad ending first and then I couldn't read the good ending till I got to my next class... just whaii.

Imma read moreeeee (Audrey needs boyfriend. Audrey x SOMEONE)

Mon, March 26th, 2018 4:48pm

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