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A dark and dreary morning hung over the town of Myasm. The clouds were a dark grey and no sun could be seen. Every morning Norman would g... Read Chapter
As one long night falls over the small town, a man remains awake. Someone who fears the dark while realizing the rationale. Dark brings i... Read Chapter
Norman left his small, quiet house at 7:00pm. Not something to do if you wanted to live. It was dark and an hour past curfew meaning the ... Read Chapter
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For what it is, which is just two paragraphs so far... It's very good. Better than most works I've seen on this site, because it captures the imagination easily and there is no nonsense going on, I appreciate writers who are very straightforward. So far, the setting and this "somber-soot" has been established, and I hope there are some more elaborations in the future, which I'm sure there will be as this is likely a rough draft.
Fri, October 20th, 2017 8:29amAuthor
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I appreciate the praise and the attention to my writing style. In an ever increasing world of impatience I find it important to keep things straight to the point with rich details to keep the reader engrossed. This is definitely not the end of Myasm and Norman if the mystery shows promise. Thank you for your constructive opinion.
Fri, October 20th, 2017 9:10am