My Heart

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic


Just scribbled down how i feel sometimes.


My Heart

 

I sit alone in bed and cry

Wondering why

Wondering why

 

The pain is relentless

And endless

Always endless

 

I'm slipping and sliding into a pool of sadness

Madness

Sadness and Madness

 

Come, catch me if you can

I need you

Maybe you might need me too

 

Kiss me

Tame me

Keep me

Slain me

 

Just don't leave

Or I will grieve

And cry some more

Until I'm sore


Submitted: October 20, 2017

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G&O

I think you have a wonderful way of opening your heart. It's a very touching poem.

Fri, October 20th, 2017 8:12pm

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Thank you dear

Sat, October 21st, 2017 10:38pm

Pariah666

What beautiful words from a beautiful heart :)

Tue, October 24th, 2017 1:41pm

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Thank you very much, that means a lot to me.

Wed, October 25th, 2017 12:44am

Chris Cross

Your words, sharp and powerful, thump in rhythm at the door of my own frailty, empaling my heart until I feel numb and devastated

Wed, November 1st, 2017 2:35pm

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Thank you for reading and leaving such a great comment Chris.

Fri, November 10th, 2017 1:04am

stranger in the corner

you have your moments as do we all, and though we literally live on the opposite sides of the planet I will always be here to "hold you until the shakes have passed" that has never changed in the years we have been friends and it never will!

Thu, July 19th, 2018 9:10pm

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Thank you Sky. It is very comforting to know I have friends who truly care and will not leave me when things get tough. I am so glad we have each other.

Fri, July 20th, 2018 10:17pm

G&O

Your words seem to come from a wounded heart. Your words open my heart to you. My heart will always be yours and it will never leave you.

Mon, July 30th, 2018 10:07pm

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I am very touched. I am so very lucky to have such a wonderful man in my life. Thank you.

Mon, July 30th, 2018 9:37pm

darrellmills1679

A very melancholy piece. I enjoyed it very much.

Mon, April 1st, 2019 12:35am

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Thank you so much Darrell. I really appreciate it.

Sun, March 31st, 2019 9:28pm

Stephen Casner

Very good minimilast it is hard using so few words to express so much emotion but you have done it so well and elegantly and bring connection in sharing the sorrow

Mon, July 15th, 2019 4:22pm

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Thanks Stephen. I appreciate that you took the time to read and comment. It means a lot.

Mon, July 15th, 2019 11:27am

Olivemateen79

Beautiful

Mon, August 5th, 2019 5:21pm

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Thanks dear.

Mon, August 5th, 2019 11:04am

Imperfect-Perfectionist

So smooth, yet so powerful. Lovely read! (:

Fri, October 11th, 2019 4:01am

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Thank you so much! That really means a lot to me.

Thu, October 10th, 2019 9:32pm

TheGreyUndying

Real life emotions are the most real life of all. It's real, and not just a piece of poetry that you write. You've portrayed your emotions with a brilliant way to show your rhyming. It's deep and personal. If your friends can surround you like a fire, your heart will have a warm place to go to. Beautiful and bittersweet at the same time!

Sat, December 21st, 2019 9:29pm

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Thank you so much, I really appreciate your comment. When I hit rock bottom I was thankfully able to turn to writing. It is what kept me going.

Sat, December 21st, 2019 10:37pm

JOY1998

Nice poem. i felt the message after reading.

Mon, March 2nd, 2020 1:32pm

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Thank you so much. That means a lot to me.

Tue, March 3rd, 2020 12:36am

John Ross Hart

Definitely written from the heart... and very moving

Thu, March 19th, 2020 1:46am

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Thank you so much John. I went through some very very rough times . It really means a lot to me that you took the time to read and comment.

Thu, March 19th, 2020 1:48am

Sharief Hendricks

Such a sorrow filled poem Criss...

The pain of both the physical and the emotional...

Hopefully you don't have many of these days anymore...fingers crossed !



Fri, July 10th, 2020 9:38am

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Thankfully i am much much better now. I am grateful i was able to turn to writing.
In the year 2017, 7 years after my fall, i finally hit rock bottom. Thankfully things could not get any worse for me anymore, and i slowly began to put myself back together.
I have a lot to be grateful for now.
Thanks for reading and commenting! You gave me so much to smile about.

Fri, July 10th, 2020 5:25am

Penetentman

So wonderfuly sad. I can really feel the emptyness and pain but sense that yearning for love in the middle of deep lonelyness. Well you may still have pain in this life, but if you sure dont have to be loney any more cause your an amazing friend and you can always find me and others here!

Sun, August 16th, 2020 11:45pm

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Thank you so much David.
I am so grateful i met such amazing people like you and a reason to keep going.

Sat, August 22nd, 2020 7:39am

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