My Heart

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Poem by: Criss Sole

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Status: Finished | Genre: Non-Fiction | House: Booksie Classic

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Just scribbled down how i feel sometimes.

Submitted: October 20, 2017

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Submitted: October 20, 2017

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My Heart

I sit alone in bed and cry

Wondering why

The pain is relentless

And endless

Always endless

I'm slipping and sliding into a pool of sadness

Madness

Sadness and Madness

Come, catch me if you can

I need you

Maybe you might need me too

Kiss me

Tame me

Keep me

Slain me

Just don't leave

Or I will grieve

And cry some more

Until I'm sore

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G&O

Comment | 16 words

Fri, October 20th, 2017 1:12pm

I think you have a wonderful way of opening your heart. It's a very touching poem.

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Sat, October 21st, 2017 10:38pm

Thank you dear

Pariah666

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Tue, October 24th, 2017 6:41am

What beautiful words from a beautiful heart :)

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Wed, October 25th, 2017 12:44am

Thank you very much, that means a lot to me.

Chris Cross

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Wed, November 1st, 2017 7:35am

Your words, sharp and powerful, thump in rhythm at the door of my own frailty, empaling my heart until I feel numb and devastated

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Fri, November 10th, 2017 1:04am

Thank you for reading and leaving such a great comment Chris.

stranger in the corner

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Thu, July 19th, 2018 2:10pm

you have your moments as do we all, and though we literally live on the opposite sides of the planet I will always be here to "hold you until the shakes have passed" that has never changed in the years we have been friends and it never will!

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Fri, July 20th, 2018 10:17pm

Thank you Sky. It is very comforting to know I have friends who truly care and will not leave me when things get tough. I am so glad we have each other.

G&O

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Mon, July 30th, 2018 3:07pm

Your words seem to come from a wounded heart. Your words open my heart to you. My heart will always be yours and it will never leave you.

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Mon, July 30th, 2018 9:37pm

I am very touched. I am so very lucky to have such a wonderful man in my life. Thank you.

darrellmills1679

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Sun, March 31st, 2019 5:35pm

A very melancholy piece. I enjoyed it very much.

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Sun, March 31st, 2019 9:28pm

Thank you so much Darrell. I really appreciate it.

Stephen Casner

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Mon, July 15th, 2019 9:22am

Very good minimilast it is hard using so few words to express so much emotion but you have done it so well and elegantly and bring connection in sharing the sorrow

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Mon, July 15th, 2019 11:27am

Thanks Stephen. I appreciate that you took the time to read and comment. It means a lot.