Alice - The Ending of Darkness

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Thrillers  |  House: The Imaginarium

Table of Contents

More Than A Dream

(This chapter has been edited from its original construction)     The White Queen sat on her bed starring down at t... Read Chapter

The Rabbit Hole

  (This chapter has been edited from its original construction)       Alice sat underneath the br... Read Chapter

The Door and The Journey Begins

(This chapter has been edited from its original construction)       Alice continued to fall down the hole,... Read Chapter

The Wolf, The Hatter, and an Unpleasant Guest

(This chapter has been edited from its original construction)         Alice ran through the fores... Read Chapter

The Forest of Hallucinations

(This chapter has been edited from it original construction)         On the far end of the world ... Read Chapter

The Invasion and A Loss Of Friends

Alice found herself in the Hatters arms being carried back to the tea party. Her headache hadn’t fully faded and he... Read Chapter

An Unhappy Burial

Cheshire followed Alice as she made her way back to the village. The flames were dying down but the destruction remained. On the ground, ... Read Chapter

The Oracle and A Cloaked Man

Alice, Cheshire, and the Hatter walked in the forest with their heads hanged low in the setting sun. No words were spoken as their lost f... Read Chapter

The Garden of Happiness

Michael stood in the armory placing his silver plated armor on with it glittering in the light of the room. Four other angels were puttin... Read Chapter

The White Queen

Alice awakened and sat up holding her head as it started to pound vigorously. She saw the Hatter sitting at the edge of a bed that was ne... Read Chapter

The Truth is Revealed

Alice and the White Queen walked out the back of the castle and into a small garden where the pedals of flowers glowed in a diversity of ... Read Chapter

Under a Star Lit Night

The next day Alice woke up in her bed noticing a black slim dress resting at the edge of the end of the bed. Outside on the balcony she s... Read Chapter

Danger in the Skies

Alice stood next to the infirmary bed where the Hatter lied unconscious from the attack from the Black Queen. She watched as his chest ro... Read Chapter

Goodbye Chess


I'm sorry in advance for what lies at the end of this chapter.
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True Power Revealed


Make sure to check out the prologue that I decided to write. Thanks.
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Then There Was Death

Another nightmare crept into Alice’s head as she slept. She expected it to be the same as the other two that had haunted her, but she f... Read Chapter

Thanks for the Meal

Alice crept out of the small hiding place she took shelter in. Her eyes scanned the room cautiously, looking to see if any of the Black Q... Read Chapter

White Castle Falls

Alice limped quickly with a sting shooting up from her leg as she led herself blindly through the cave as the hare chased after her. A sm... Read Chapter

Family Reunion

Smoke arose from the rubble of what remained of the White Castle. Alice slowly walked through the destruction feeling the jagged edges of... Read Chapter

Escape

Alice awakened to find her mother’s eyes looking down on her with the queen’s hand stroking her hair away from her face. The White ... Read Chapter

Nightmare Premonition

“I thought you were dead?” Alice’s eyes stayed wide thinking that they were playing tricks on her. She watched him die in her arm... Read Chapter

The Ending of Darkness

The morning air rushed into Alice’s room as she strapped her glistening, silver armor on. Last night after her nightmare, no words we... Read Chapter

Happily Ever After.....For Now


This the final chapter for this book. I want to thank everyone who has journeyed down the rabbit hole and has followed Alice through this book. Without you guys, this wouldn't have been possible.
Everyone's tremendous support has driven me to write this book, that now I can finally saw that Book 1 has successfully come to an end. Thank you again to everyone and I hope enjoy this last
chapter and the Epilogue that is to follow.
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Epilogue - True Evil Rises

The Hatter and Alice sat in the garden admiring the flowers as they ate together on a spread out blanket. They looked into each other... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments

hullabaloo22

Alice as a kind of goth misfit -- I'm liking that idea very much. The dialogue was excellently done, Reaper. Can't wait to read more!

Tue, October 31st, 2017 7:57pm

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Thank you a lot. I know how much you like Alice the original and i dont want to disappoint. Thanks again.

Tue, October 31st, 2017 12:58pm

jaylisbeth

I can tell I will enjoy reading this very much. I love the whole Noir feel and the gothic metaphors.

Thu, November 2nd, 2017 8:16pm

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Thank you. Happy you're enjoying it. Keeps me going.

Thu, November 2nd, 2017 1:22pm

Ana Gagani

Thank you very much that you've told me about Alice. Good luck Reaper

Wed, November 8th, 2017 2:10pm

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You're welcome. I hope you're enjoying it.

Wed, November 8th, 2017 6:58am

Mike S.

Fine writing, Reap; kept my attention, which is no mean trick--Alice's father is one mean-ass dude!

Thu, November 9th, 2017 5:03pm

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Glad you liked it. I'm honored that it drew you in. Hopefully if you read more of it it will still keep you tuned in. No one has said that it's hard to get their attention and I'm happy you're the first. A challenge it is.

Thu, November 9th, 2017 9:08am

Sunny Malik

This is amazing! I love the twist you did! :D

Tue, November 14th, 2017 7:33pm

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Thanks.

Tue, November 14th, 2017 11:42am

Miss Midnight

I love, love Alice in Wonderland and basically flock, ah, more stampeded to a story with a hint of that element, lol. Great descriptions. Alice is nicely portrayed, with her gloomy thoughts and curious nature. Yes, I said curious, lol. I love that you're turning it a bit darker, but still use the trademarks that make this Alice, lol.
Argh, I wanted to jab her father in the throat but squealed in delight when she fought back and bit him.
I liked the overall flow and the pace. This will no doubt turn into a great story, and I'm happy to jump down the rabbit hole with you. Excellent Chapter!

Thu, November 16th, 2017 7:17am

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Thanks Midnight. I hope you enjoy the others as well.

Thu, November 16th, 2017 2:27am

Zefyr

Oh so this is like a darker version of Alice in Wonderland. I like this. :)

Wed, August 1st, 2018 4:33pm

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Precisely. I'm glad you're enjoying it. The story gets better down the road and yet, there may be some parts that will make your cry for some characters, but I'm not going to spoil that. After the first book you read, this will be the next one to be finished and edited. If you really love the book at the end, I am making a five book series out of this Wonderland story of mine, plus an off series too. So there will be lots of Wonderland to read. Well you have jumped down the rabbit hole with Alice, hope you follow in the footsteps of her adventure. Thank you.

Wed, August 1st, 2018 11:33am

ShadaStorm120

Oh, this is going to be very interesting. I can tell I'm going to enjoy where you take this tale and change it from the one we know. Anyway, this is a good start and I look forward to knowing what happens next :)

Sat, August 4th, 2018 10:59pm

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Thank you Shadastorm. I do hope you enjoy it.

Sun, August 5th, 2018 4:06am

BriannasBooks

Alice sounds like she has a very difficult life, having to cope with a father who is physically abusive. I really love your descriptions and the way you make the reader feel like they're right there with Alice. I could really sense her loneliness. Well done! :)

Thu, August 27th, 2020 8:38pm

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Thank you very much, Brianna. Im glad you like it. However, the book is not completely edited, still working on it, but I hope you enjoy it. Thank you for reading.

Thu, August 27th, 2020 7:10pm

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