I'll Comment On What You Write.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Commenting is a good thing. It must be done honestly I wrote this poem.

I'll comment on what you write,

I'll read every word it it takes me all night.

I'll get in and feel the flow,

The poem should be taking me where I want to go.


Say what you want to say,

Even if it's only one word.

You can write it in anyway,

You can make it fly like a bird.


I'm on the other end,

Waiting to read.

You can send me 'round the bend,

Or make me furious like a wild steed.


Still, I'll carry on reading,

What you have written.

I won't be receding,

I'll stay and get bitten.


Come on, don't be afraid,

Write what is inside.

Get it out your head,

You don't need to hide.

Submitted: November 11, 2017

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Such an honest piece, John :)

Sat, November 11th, 2017 6:21pm


Thank you!

Sat, November 11th, 2017 10:26am

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