I'll Comment On What You Write.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


Commenting is a good thing. It must be done honestly I wrote this poem.

Submitted: November 11, 2017

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I'll comment on what you write,

I'll read every word it it takes me all night.

I'll get in and feel the flow,

The poem should be taking me where I want to go.

 

Say what you want to say,

Even if it's only one word.

You can write it in anyway,

You can make it fly like a bird.

 

I'm on the other end,

Waiting to read.

You can send me 'round the bend,

Or make me furious like a wild steed.

 

Still, I'll carry on reading,

What you have written.

I won't be receding,

I'll stay and get bitten.

 

Come on, don't be afraid,

Write what is inside.

Get it out your head,

You don't need to hide.


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