Who Criticizes The Critic ?

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yet let me tell you your just a jealous little Fuck



you see you have to harp on the timid to get your point across



it is no tragic loss if you just leave us all alone



go tell it to a tombstone friend



positive reinforcement strengthens one's heart



only negativity kills it you see



but you simply disagree to live with your hate



nothing is right for you always wrong



you present yourselves in the best seats in the house



there you grumble, bitch & pout



?



Who critcizes the critic



is there some superior other



yet why should we even bother



the blind will lead the blind



soon to fall in a ditch



Critics suck you see living in their vain glory



always like to change the story



no there not perfect who are they kidding



never do they say they are sorry or ask to be forgiven



eyes with blackened shells in their brain



let me be the first to explain



its totally impossible to live up to there perfect standard



yet they think they are always right never wrong



always in the same lame song



yet what will it take before we could get along



we both can agree to disagree



why don't you just let people be

Submitted: November 17, 2017

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yet let me tell you your just a jealous little Fuck

you see you have to harp on the timid to get your point across

it is no tragic loss if you just leave us all alone

go tell it to a tombstone friend

positive reinforcement strengthens one's heart

only negativity kills it you see

but you simply disagree to live with your hate

nothing is right for you always wrong

you present yourselves in the best seats in the house

there you grumble, bitch & pout

 

Who critcizes the critic

is there some superior other

yet why should we even bother

the blind will lead the blind

soon to fall in a ditch

Critics suck you see living in their vain glory

always like to change the story

no there not perfect who are they kidding

never do they say they are sorry or ask to be forgiven

eyes with blackened shells in their brain

let me be the first to explain

its totally impossible to live up to there perfect standard

yet they think they are always right never wrong

always in the same lame song

yet what will it take before we could get along

we both can agree to disagree

why don't you just let people be


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