THAT NIGHT!
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Poem by: DecemberBoyMarleek
THAT NIGHT That night! When the darkness loved and cuddled me When the only luck was being owl-less Cloudy was the sky,no stars no moon Rowdy was my heart,deep scars more wounds soon Even the distant lightning laughed at me that night The wind hurriedly blew me insults Not forgetting the crickets that scolded me The so-called chariot of sleep left me at the stop uncarried The so cold night willed to deplete my unsettled immunity It was that night that the imaginations I curved mocked me Silence was the best comfort and so it kidnapped me The night long without a dawn,the night that put me down Such was that night!
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Comments
You have a unique way of writing that I can't really explain but it grabbed me. I like the picture you painted and the mood that was expressed. The words seem to flow well together, my only suggestion would be to make each sentence a separate line or to add periods so that the words would flow even nicer than they already do. Good poem
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