Not Virgin Anymore

Triveni

Well explained in form of poetry...nice choice of words..:)

jaylisbeth

Powerful to say the least, my dear!

LeParadisNoirPoetique

I'm so fucking happy that this isn't personal dearest. One only has to read this to understand this is not a simple night of passion. I hate rape more than anything, and this poem is such a harrowing read explaining a woman's pain when she is feeling the sickness of rape. The title 'Not Virgin Anymore' is so cruel because anyone who loses theirs this way will remember it and be haunted by it forever. Some will even take their own lives because they will always be a victim, and it's too much to deal with. This is so chilling, because without spoken words you are describing in poetic detail the harrowing trauma this woman is going through. Rehmat this is so powerfully worded, and darker than your other work based on the subject it is dealing with. You have wrote this in poetic form beautifully, and this is such a chilling, haunting poem. It's one of your best yet, and no woman should ever feel the touch of rape.

hullabaloo22

Powerful write, Rehmat. The feelings you describe are those caused by a brutal beast, and should never be allowed to happen. Unfortunately, it is all too common.

Mike S.

Very sad, and very good, Rehmat!

Spyguy

Too bad that this happens way too often! I pray it didn’t happen that way for you!

saphiara

Its powerful when it can scare the reader ..express the brutal conditions and make tears appear..

Spyguy

Cruelty has no place with women!

Sue Harris

A torturous read, but an excellent poem. The torment, both physical and mental, is so harrowing. Very well written!

Mike Gascoigne

To my eyes this has a fresh modern feel to it. Well done. Rape is such a ghastly subject it is, in my opinion, brave of you to express it, albeit (thank goodness) not from personal experience.
I have helped counsel people of both sexes who have been subjected to this brutality, and the emotional scars are much harder to heal than those physical.

Prism Persona

The imagery, the raw power and emotions! A well written poem indeed! I have never experienced this either, but you don’t have to if you honestly think about. I think about it cause it’s the current reality. I’d rather try to be mentally prepared so as to do what I can if/when it happens. We shouldn’t be so fearful of it that we are paralyzed but it shouldn’t be in the back of our minds either. By saying we, I include men in it too. The truth is no one is immune and everyone must be on guard. I love this very much! Keep up the excellent work!

Sharief Hendricks

Excellent description TR

Unfortunately this disease is still all too common...

Good job....

LE. Berry

What a well written and subtly descriptive piece of the violence of rape. Effective but non-exploitative, not an easy thing to do.