THE KILLER

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic


The Deceiver. Mark founds out zaky has another base and goes to the check the second base.

Table of Contents

MURDER IN THE HOUSE


About: one man that had tried to get in my way and he did. He was a police officer I killed his wife so he tried to killed me, luckily he was arrested and then he escape from prison and came after
me and killed me, I'm writing this to let my wife know that I was murderer so let's begin my story
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CAR CHASE


A big Car chase. Mark is trying to catch assassin but someone was wearing the assassin suit to trick mark.
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FAMILY TIME


Family Time. But there is trouble, mark family get's attacked in Funland.
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A PLANNER


A Planner. Zaky is known as the Killer, people didn't know that zaky is a well planner, mark founds out where zaky changes his car base plate.
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TRICKY PUZZLE


Tricky Puzzle, zaky gives mark to solve a puzzle. Mark solves the puzzle but zaky sends more puzzles to solve.
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ENCOUNTER


Encounter. Mark stumble into zaky thug and he finds a file when he was chasin.
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THE DECEIVER


The Deceiver. Mark founds out zaky has another base and goes to the check the second base.
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ENEMY LIES BEHIND


Enemy Lies Behind, Merk found out Someone Informer of Zaky in the Police Department.
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KILLER SQUAD


KILLER SQUAD, Mark finds out the Zaky's team name and he finds who is the KILLER OF MS Mia and puts him in the cell.
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A FRIEND IN NEED IS A FRIEND INDEED.


A Friend In Need Is a Friend Indeed, Mark loved ones gets shot with the Sniper's gun.
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REVENGE


REVENGE. Mark loved ones died in the hospital.
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BLOODY NIGHT


Bloody Night, Mark finds out chief was helping Zaky. Mark makes chief suffer.
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Nowhere To Go


Nowhere To Go, Mark makes a plan of killing all the thugs in second base and it worked and he is saving Carlos
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Mission Possible


Mission Possible, Mark Kills Everyone in the Second Base then he Saves Carlos and then goes to his home and saves The school from Blasting into pieces
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My Wife' Murderer end

 Chapter 15 My Wife Murderer End.   Mark: Okay honey, let's go home Gracy: Ok dad, let's go (Mark gets in h... Read Chapter

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Recent Comments

Kathrina Csernis

Oh great I see you separated the chapters! That's awesome! Hahaha I really enjoyed this chapter, it was a whole lot easier to read as well. Keep up the good work!

Sat, December 16th, 2017 5:28am

Author
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Thanks
For enjoying my story

Sat, December 16th, 2017 3:54am

roman chan

I loved it thank you for showing me such great work.

Fri, December 29th, 2017 2:21am

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thanks for reading my story THE KILLER i would love if u can fan me that would be awesome :) and also I'm enjoying your Story zootopia

Fri, December 29th, 2017 8:23am

Risk_A_

Nice story and your title are also really good to describe the story.

Keep up the good work :D

Mon, January 15th, 2018 2:28pm

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Thank you for reading THE KILLER Chapter 1 and also i have upload all the Chapters of THE KILLER story, Thanks for reading THE KILLER Chapter 1
Thanks with love :)

Wed, January 17th, 2018 1:04am

sania

Tue, January 23rd, 2018 9:58am

sania

Interesting story my lil bro my love muneeb

Tue, January 23rd, 2018 10:00am

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Hey Sis,
Thanks for commenting on this chapter its really appreciated you should read my chapters one by one then you will understand my story my character and etc easily
Thanks with love :)

Tue, January 23rd, 2018 5:54am

Young Papz

I followed your post on my wall and i came to read the killer but honestly, i don't get the story at all. Well, i dunno if am being rude or i am just missing the point cos i see a lot more awesome comment about how good but i just don't feel any of it so i will be honest and post a very honest comment just like u asked in your post on my profile.
1. I selected the book form of the killer (book/crime thriller), but its more of a script.
2. Everything is mixed up in your script. Character name mixed with action and parenthesis. (I will recommend you should check out final draft.)
3. Your are supposed to show us what happens in the script but you are telling us. For example we can't see when a character is thinking uf you are showing us.
4. And i think u are rushing through your story. Slow it down a bit to develop every scene to steal away the readers' attention. (Otherwise they can get bored and leave it)

I think your story is awesome. Its back story is neat so take your time to develop it. Happy writing ;)

Sun, February 11th, 2018 9:36am

Aira crimson

I know this is old and I am late but I was busy and just happen to read you quickie now. I read the chapter but I have to say it didn't draw me in like it should have, it's not bad and plot is nice but it sounded more like conversation then a novel or a story.
I recommend not to write character info in a table like that, it makes remembering them harder instead try to explain them trough POVs and description and try to add description and explain a scene so you don't have to write a character's name before a dialogue.

Sat, November 7th, 2020 7:54am

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