The Better Part

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I wish someone could see

The Better Part
 Wish that you could see
The better part of me
I guess I hide it oh to well
Behind this fortress shell
Cannot let anyone see inside
It just makes me to petrified
A heart broken to many times
Can't be read between shattered lines
So much love to give to you
But I am just to afraid to
I am afraid that you cannot see
The better part of me

Submitted: December 16, 2017

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An excellent, expressive poem, Roger. It takes a lot of trust, makes us so vulnerable, to let someone know we care.....and then they are unaware of the depth of our feelings. Sorry if this doesn't make sense, but I truly understood what you meant.

Sat, December 16th, 2017 7:41pm


Thanks Hulla

Sat, December 16th, 2017 10:40pm

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