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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

I'm going away
You tell me to stay
I appreciate 
It always makes my day
Feel so very great
But leave it up to fate
Because it's lovely in its own way

I want so badly to come back
Please cut me some slack
I'll replace what I will lack
After all lights up the black
Because it's lovely when it's intact

I will always keep in touch
And I will miss you much
Know that love will fix us up
And all will be good and such
Because it's lovely itself enough

I will hear you sing
The separation will sting
But we need to believe
Because it's lovely as it seems

I'll see you again
Our bond shall never end
We'll always be more than friends
Together we will blend
The tether we have won't bend
We need not defend
Because it's lovely how it mends

I'm not gone for life
And I'll ever hold your light
And someday we'll both untie
What's in back of both our minds
We've treasured it all the time
So keep love intertwined
And after a lond while
It'll be lovely how in lonely binds
Each other we will find
This will never be good-bye.

Submitted: December 17, 2017

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Why is this the one people read? lol

Sat, January 18th, 2020 1:03am


Poem review.

The poem refers how two persons we are bond or tight to the love. It doesn't matter the circumstance that both are going through their lives. Their memories, dreams,always get back to their minds and hearts, when they need to it. Their love is always strong and firm through the time.
In the first stanza, I can see rhymes schemes, for example: away, stay, day and way at the end of the each sentence. In the other group: appreciate, great and fate. This poem is divided in six stanzas with its rhymes schemes, also the mood of the poem is very romantic and a little bit sad.
In conclusion: I like this poem because it closes your mind in the sense of two lovers who are living in love all time. This is when, the love triumph all time although the adversity.

Sat, June 13th, 2020 9:11pm

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