The Breaking Of The Fast
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Poem by: tom mcmullen
The Breaking Of The Fast
The savage sacrifice
Has followed god's rules,
The animals suffered
In the morning cruel.
Now in the evening cool
They gather, hell's ghouls,
Blood dripping from their lips
Like red satanic jewels.
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Comments
It's kinda scary. I really did like it. And it's great at the same time.
Thanks Maria, humans do terrible things to animals!
Interesting concept and it flowed nicely. Short and a little dark, I like it
Thanks for your comments Jezzy, the sacrifice of animals is certainly dark!
I didn't laugh on this one. But I frowned...
Thanks for your comment Derina, this is certainly not a funny poem, food for thought I hope!
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