Last Wish

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Mystery and Crime  |  House: Booksie Classic


Story of a Boys Wish


i was walking home after my part time work shift, i took the same path i used to take always,
through the long park that sits in the middle of my city, it was just me and the cold summer night
free from clouds stars burning in the sky.
As i walked to the center of the park, a shooting star passed crossed the sky, i looked up closed
my eyes and made a wish.. when i opened my eyes the star kept getting bigger and bigger facing
through wards me, my legs started to run on its own, my eyes and mind was on the falling star..
and in seconds the star crashed on the park, all went dark, there was nothing but blackness.
I felt my eyes were closed, i slowly opened them and saw a burning rock with heat waves
spreading, i was only feets away from it but did not feel the heat, i walked to it and saw a persons
under the rock crashes half of his body, and he had my face.. ,,i am dead... i was not sad , or angry
at what happened to me, my mind kept on thinking about how i died, it wasnt a cliche or fate kinda
story, i didnt take a different path today or nothing special happened and i wasnt exited for
tomorrow either, it was normal as ever, all i did was look at the sky, saw a shooting star and made
a wish, thats all. Yeah i made a wish, i made a wish, what did i wish for??


Submitted: December 30, 2017

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