Ultra Violetta

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  No Houses


My advice was shared

 I told them not to  

in one ear,  out the other

 All spoken in vain

no one listens anymore

Ive had quite enough

 deaf to the truth and the word

 

I am the crime scene 

they can't hear me speak 


Submitted: January 04, 2018

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Kathrina Csernis

Well, took me a couple seconds to figure out what you did, and I love it lol how you've set it out makes me think of someones thoughts just circling him, eating at him... maybe lol anyways, I enjoyed it :)

Thu, January 4th, 2018 3:56am

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So cool you got it, kudos to you :D
Thank you very much Kat :D

Thu, January 4th, 2018 4:37pm

Jay Rose

Weird... but cool. Not gonna lie though, had to look at Kat's comment to figure it out.

Tue, January 9th, 2018 1:34am

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Lol, well it's nice you got to see it ))
this is what happens when I take an ideA ( using 3 haikus to make 1 poem) and try and think of a way to make it even more strange .
Yeah, I'm a bit of a weirdo )))

Thanks J.Rose :D

Mon, January 8th, 2018 5:51pm

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