EYES DOWN

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Flash Fiction  |  House: Writing Bunch

Submitted: January 05, 2018

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  EYES DOWN:

The bell rang at the house of Willie stroker.He got up while wearing his shirt and opened the door.He was surprised to see his long met friend Mark.They both hugged each other and Willie invited him in.They were talking without pause as there were many things to tell each other.Willie brang some tea for Mark and himself."You must remember Mr.John....right"Mark asked."The best friend of our fathers?"Willie asked and took another sip of his hot tea."Yes, him exactly"Mark answered."He had a daughter of 13 years old.Remember we met her when she was 11, now she must be 13"Willie said"She had beautiful hair I remember, well anyway what about Mr.John?".Mark's face expressions were conveying a message that something wasn't too right."Annabelle, his daughter she has benn suffering from some disease"He said sadly."What....which disease"Willie asked and kept his tea on the table as he wanted to know violently."I don't exactly know, but it's a dangerous one"Mark said."Don't you think we should go to see her, they are our relatives in some way"Willie suggested."You should go but I need to go for my job interview.So, I can't come"Mark said."Wow, good luck for the interview and don't worry I will tell them about you as well"Willie said.Mark finished his tea and went up to go.He hugged his friend and said goodbye.When he reached near the door, Willie called his name.Mark looked back."Tell me what Anabelle likes, I thought to get a gift for her as well"Willie asked."Well, once she told me that she want to have a hairband as golden as a real gold and which would make her hair look more amazing...so you can buy it for her"Mark said and went for his job interview.Willie get his car and went to buy a hairband as golden as a gold.He went to the market but which ever market he went he couldn't find a golden hair band.13 hours past and finally he found a golden hairband.He was really tired but he wanna go see Annabelle.So he went to Mr.John's house.He rang the bell and some servant opened the door.He went inside and wasn't really ready to see sick Annabelle.He met Mr.John who became really happy to see Willie.He said him to come inside the room.Willie went inside the room where Annabelle was.

When they reached Annabelle's room to his surprise, she had no hair.She was suffering from a cancer due to which her beautiful hair were gone and Willie's 13 hours were all wasted and he turned his EYES DOWN.

 

 


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