Alison is the error in a perfect society. Her life is at risk. When an unexpected friend helps her out, she finds out there is a lot more to this perfect city.
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Submitted: January 05, 2018
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dude this chapter is cool as hell
will definitely be waiting for more
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Thank you so much. The next chapter will probably be out on sunday. (If u fan me, you will get a notification)
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I like the plot of your book and I am curious to see where you take it. There were some minor grammatical errors (sorry, I have the curse of being able to notice spelling and grammatical errors) but other than that it was really good:)
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Thank you so much!!
Good start to an original piece of work. I found it easy to engage with the main character. Looking forward to reading the rest.
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Thank you!
This is such a cool story! Reminds me of what I'm planning to do with my series.
Since you are such a good writer, it would be amazing if you would like to take a look at it! I'll definitely finish this story asap.
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I would love to look at it.
Thank you!
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