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Book by: DystopianFictionWriter

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Status: In Progress | Genre: Fantasy | House: Booksie Classic

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Alison is the error in a perfect society. Her life is at risk. When an unexpected friend helps her out, she finds out there is a lot more to this perfect city.

Fantasy fantasy sci-fi

Chapter 1 (ver.1)

Chapter 1

Submitted: January 05, 2018

I am the Error. I am the glitch in our flawless system that society has been fearing for centuries, and for... Read Chapter

Chapter 2 (ver.1)

Chapter 2

Submitted: January 22, 2018

Chapter 2. "Can you hear me?" something bright gets waved in front of my face, a light. I open my mouth to say somethi... Read Chapter

Chapter 3 (ver.1)

Chapter 3

Submitted: February 14, 2018

Hey everyone, Sorry about where the font changes color, the format, and my computer repeatedly broke while I was writing this. Please leave feedback in the comments section! Thanks so much!
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Chapter 4 (ver.1)

Chapter 4

Submitted: March 23, 2018

The heat is scorching, my shoulders are aching from the supply duffels and I'm hungry. I look over at Tess, who appears fine and wond... Read Chapter

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devin e.

Comment | 13 words

Thu, January 11th, 2018 3:47pm

dude this chapter is cool as hell
will definitely be waiting for more

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Comment | 23 words

Fri, January 12th, 2018 5:02am

Thank you so much. The next chapter will probably be out on sunday. (If u fan me, you will get a notification)
__DystopianFictionWriter

scatteredsquirrel

Comment | 45 words

Mon, January 22nd, 2018 4:29pm

I like the plot of your book and I am curious to see where you take it. There were some minor grammatical errors (sorry, I have the curse of being able to notice spelling and grammatical errors) but other than that it was really good:)

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Comment | 4 words

Mon, January 22nd, 2018 5:52pm

Thank you so much!!

Markie Bee

Comment | 24 words

Thu, February 15th, 2018 2:20pm

Good start to an original piece of work. I found it easy to engage with the main character. Looking forward to reading the rest.

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Comment | 2 words

Thu, February 15th, 2018 3:00pm

Thank you!

J. Nilsdotter Swartswe

Comment | 44 words

Sat, March 24th, 2018 1:15pm

This is such a cool story! Reminds me of what I'm planning to do with my series.
Since you are such a good writer, it would be amazing if you would like to take a look at it! I'll definitely finish this story asap.

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Comment | 9 words

Sun, March 25th, 2018 11:35am

I would love to look at it.
Thank you!