BROKEN RECORD

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


record


 

 
like a record that's broken
she would constantly say
i love you
i love you
i love you
all day
.
i certainly knew that
how not, when she'd say
i love you
i love you
i love you
OK
.
i got that she loved me
but why did she say
i love you
i love you
i love you
that way
.
and i also loved her
but i wouldn't say
i love you
i love you
i love you
all day
.
my acts showed i loved her
and this way, i'd say
i love you
i love you
i love you
OK ?
.
she's no longer with me
she just passed away
i love you
i love you
i love you
i say
.
but she cannot hear me
and she cannot say
i love you
i love you
i love you
no way
.
my sweet broken record
i wish you could say
i love you
i love you
i love you
today


Submitted: January 06, 2018

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hullabaloo22

This is a very moving poem, moonphish. She, I guess, was showing her insecurity, while he was more confident, didn't feel the need to keep saying it. So sad, if I'm understanding it right.

Sat, January 6th, 2018 8:14pm

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