HANA TO YUME

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Book by: MARIA KUZENARI SHINOHARA

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Status: In Progress | Genre: Romance | House: Booksie Classic

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HANA TO YUME - FLOWERS AND DREAMS

Maria is confuse about her life. She can't solve her problems about her family and friends. While trying to fix her dreams, she meets Louis Kanzaki and Ishida Sou. Louis confesses her that he loves
her. This makes her problems more big. Sou tells her many things that she finds necessary but don't know the reason of it. She notices they know too much about her. They try to tell her something
they want her to know. Soon she discovers their deep connection with her and their true motive.

Romance romance mystery harem slice-of-life

Chapter 1 (ver.12)

TOO AFRAID TO MOVE FORWARD

Submitted: January 06, 2018

I, Yume Maria, studying in 11th grade, am very confuse. Confuse of how to see people and how they see me. I want to enjoy this life but a... Read Chapter

Chapter 2 (ver.1)

SUCH A COWARD I AM

Submitted: January 09, 2018

For a few seconds I have been thinking that he is talking to someone else, but soon I realize that I am the only person he could talk to.... Read Chapter

Chapter 3 (ver.1)

COURAGE FOR FEAR

Submitted: January 11, 2018

"Why are you here?" I ask him. "To meet you", he says with a smile on his face, "I want to say sorry to you." "What?" I ask with ... Read Chapter

Chapter 4 (ver.1)

DEAR FEAR

Submitted: January 22, 2018

Today in the morning, when I enter the school which is still standing on the ground, I hear some noise. All the students around me are sa... Read Chapter

Chapter 5 (ver.1)

HIDDEN I

Submitted: January 22, 2018

My fear which is trying to get out from the boundaries of my heart, has started to pump along with my heartbeat. They have beco... Read Chapter

Chapter 6 (ver.1)

AT ISHIDA - KUN'S HOUSE

Submitted: January 25, 2018

I open my eyes which was sleeping a nice sleep. I think I have been sleeping for too long. I feel very fresh. But I also feel v... Read Chapter

Chapter 7 (ver.1)

PREPARATION OF KILLING MISSION

Submitted: January 26, 2018

Today is the day of destruction. The last day of my happy life. At least I think so. But at Ishida Sou's house, I encountered some my... Read Chapter

Chapter 8 (ver.1)

FIRST EVERYTHING

Submitted: January 30, 2018

Louis Kanzaki, the person who can be killed today, arrives one hour one minute one second and one nanosecond late. It is good that he did... Read Chapter

Chapter 9 (ver.1)

TWO PATHS, ONE LIFE

Submitted: January 31, 2018

The clock is saying that it is 3.00 a.m. and it is the middle of midnight. Ayana is now jumping in front of me. Half an hour ago she ... Read Chapter

Chapter 10 (ver.1)

GAME FOR TRUTH

Submitted: February 01, 2018

"Today, I, Ayana Yonai, will solve this unsolved mystery." Ayana gives a long declaration standing on the desk of mine. "Can you stop... Read Chapter

Chapter 11 (ver.1)

CARING

Submitted: February 07, 2018

"I never ever have thought that this mystery has so many tails", Ayana tries to clam me down with a proud expression "Thankfully the God ... Read Chapter

Chapter 12 (ver.1)

MOTIVE

Submitted: February 08, 2018

I try to open my eyes. My body feels so heavy and painful. I find it hard to move. I again try to open my eyes but the light is too brigh... Read Chapter

Chapter 13 (ver.1)

OPPORTUNITIES ARE INDIRECT

Submitted: February 14, 2018

"Why do you want me to go there?" Kotori asks with a confusing tone. "You know that Maya is an 'ALL JAPAN' radio. If I take her with ... Read Chapter

Chapter 14 (ver.1)

MYSTERY AND MYSTERIES

Submitted: February 17, 2018

"You are lucky that 'stalker -san' came to school today", Ayana says looking at a paper closely, "But that betrayal Ishida Sou didn't com... Read Chapter

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MARIA KUZENARI SHINOHARA

Comment | 25 words

Mon, January 8th, 2018 11:18pm

This is my first writing. So I wish everyone will give it enough likes and comments. Please give your responses and opinions to inspire me.

Blankly-Dreaming

Comment | 211 words

Wed, January 24th, 2018 4:40am

Hey! I'm here hahaha. So, yeah, I can't relate even more. The situation Yume is going through is literally me haha. I've always thought about it, that going with the flow is the easiest way to go because well, I'm also afraid what people will think haha. It's good to know someone knows how that feels. Only if society is less of a monotone colored world haha.

Okay, I can already tell it that this will be a great story and that ill love this.The characters, I think he will be n awesome and interesting character. I'm looking forward to see your characters develop, especially Yume with her...burden? Hahah.

I think there are only some problems here with your grammar. I'm not one to speak as I also have a lot of grammar mistakes hahaha, you know just saying. I'd gladly point them out in the in-line comments but that's kinda hard to do on a phone. There is this useful tool you can use, it's called Grammarly. Although it doesn't really cleanse the paper of grammar mistakes, it should help.

Hope I helped hahaha, and inspired you. Keep writing this because I'll be following it and your story sounds good. Your MC is so relatable, I can't haha.

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Comment | 22 words

Fri, January 26th, 2018 5:28am

Thank you for liking it. I will try my best to avoid grammar mistakes. And I am really inspired by your words.

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Comment | 46 words

Fri, January 26th, 2018 3:05am

Woah. That went from zero to 100 real quick.

There are some issues regarding the grammar used, but it can still be understood by the readers. It would be better if you improve on that aspect.

Still, it was a good chapter. Thanks for the hard work!