Limitless Spirits

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Romance


Were they just constant flowing memories and thoughts, or just spirits from a typical cold, cloudy night?


An iridescent cloud shining up in the sky

Raining memories when grief strikes oneself

I see you, I feel you

Nothing has changed in them.

 

When the Sun needs to shine and give way to the day

It evaporates into nothingness

Making everything be nonexistent as time lets it be.

 

Embracing the spirit with the wind

Freezing what once was a warm heart

Your shadow without wings

Makes me feel desolate without a possible restart.

 

Like ghosts hunting everywhere, I go

Embracing in the darkest moments when one is alone

Nothing ever disappears

Forever staying in where it always is.

 

The hole of the past

Pinning a position with a mast

Makes everything be static

Or more like a classic in one's dreams.

 

Flowing like a river’s current

My mind relapses to where we once stood

Crashing to its other end

Where nothing was supposed to bend.

 

Spirits emanating from sparks

Reappearing from now and then

Reenacting moments in distance

With only the wind snatching them away in coexistence.

 

Who is meant to think what must be thought?

Those limitless spirits without fraught

Casting your shadow from behind

An unbreakable bind.

 

Wishing I could just fly

To just sit and watch

Not to cry on a meaningless swatch

At what happiness I was forced to stash

Yet forever wash in my head and heart

As if it had just been trash.


Submitted: January 08, 2018

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K.Essler

That was very good. You indeed have a talent for for poetry. I wish I could write stuff like this. It was beautiful, thank you for sharing it with me.

Mon, January 8th, 2018 4:57am

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Thank you very much!! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!! :) Thank you for the very nice words!! n.n

Mon, January 8th, 2018 8:49pm

ChristopherErick

This is fantastic . To say the least.

Mon, January 8th, 2018 6:05am

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Thank you so much!! :)

Mon, January 8th, 2018 8:49pm

Xartorious120

the longing for a love erased can leave a lasting mark of grief. that was a great poem Ana, i really enjoyed that :)

Mon, January 8th, 2018 8:11am

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It indeed can! Thank you so much!! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!! :)

Mon, January 8th, 2018 9:48pm

Muneeb Sohail

That was very beautiful. you have a talent for writing poems. keep it up.
Thanks for sharing this poem with me, thanks with love :)

Mon, January 8th, 2018 11:45am

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Thank you very much for the nice comments and feedback!! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it! n.n

Mon, January 8th, 2018 9:50pm

Celtic-Scribe63

I have to say that poetry is not really my thing, so I couldn't in honesty give a critical review of it, that would not be fare to do.

However you did a smashing good job with this, it flowed very nicely and the imagery was good. you have a talent that I do not, and that is writing good poetry.

well done.

Mon, January 8th, 2018 12:05pm

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It's alright! Thank you so much for your nice words and feedback!! :')

Mon, January 8th, 2018 9:52pm

Sandygirl

It's beautiful. I feel like I understand what the meaning is, but I'm not going to say, because it feel like it should be unspoken. Although I'm sure some people might interpret this poem differently, because everyone has a different way to interpret things but thats ok.

Mon, January 8th, 2018 2:21pm

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Thank you so much for your feedback!!
I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! n.n

Mon, January 8th, 2018 9:54pm

Jay Rose

Beautifully written! I could feel all the meanings and emotions that have been packed into this piece. Very well done.

Mon, January 8th, 2018 6:14pm

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Thank you very much!! :D I'm really happy that you liked it!! n.n

Mon, January 8th, 2018 9:55pm

DLCannon

Very sad. I read this on a rainy day. And this makes me think of it as if it was talking about the rain, or some sort of darkness. I love the rain. Thank you for inviting me to read this! :)

Tue, January 9th, 2018 12:19am

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Thank you for reading it and your feedback!! :)

Mon, January 8th, 2018 9:59pm

Buffershaker

Eloquently written poem with flow and imagination which oozes class and passion.
I can hear the distant thunder of a million unheard souls reaching out to be heard or seeking creature comfort.
The fusion between mother nature and the spirit world you described is both beautiful and profound.
When we die it is merely the portal or doorway to another ethereal existence,I know because I've been there.(it's called Further).

Tue, January 9th, 2018 12:48am

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Thank you so SO much for your feedback!! n.n
It was very nice to read and I'm really glad that you enjoyed it!! :D

Mon, January 8th, 2018 10:11pm

S. Rasmussen

Must admit I'm not extremely good at the English level typical for poems

I believe it was about grief? About someone who has lost someone?

You managed to awake my visual sense, which is good.

You made a good gloomy atmosphere

Tue, January 9th, 2018 6:40am

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Thank you so much for your feedback!! :)

Tue, January 9th, 2018 4:06pm

Katilly

Wow! This poem really captures the emotion. I enjoyed it a lot:)

Tue, January 9th, 2018 6:57am

Author
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Thank you very much!! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!! :)

Tue, January 9th, 2018 4:12pm

B Douglas Slack

This is a wonderful poem. Metaphorically speaking, the longing for a love long past speaks for itself. You feel the person's angst at wanting a clean break, yet not willing to let go.

Bill

Tue, January 9th, 2018 3:55pm

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Thank you so much for the very nice feedback!! :)

Tue, January 9th, 2018 4:16pm

Momina Khan

wonderful!
good collection of ideas and thoughts.you are an excellent poet.welldone !!
stay happy :D

Tue, January 9th, 2018 4:36pm

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Thank you so much for the nice comments!! :D I'm really happy that you liked it!! n.n

Tue, January 9th, 2018 4:19pm

Tim ArnZen

Very well done. Keep writing!

Tue, January 9th, 2018 6:57pm

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Thank you so much!! :D

Tue, January 9th, 2018 6:16pm

Sylvermyst

A very different and beautiful poem. It flows very well together. My interpretation of your poem, is a person going through the motions of life, being hit by memories of the past, and having to push through life trying to not let them affect them.

Wed, January 10th, 2018 5:28am

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Thank you so much!! I'm really happy that you liked it!! n.n Thank you for sharing your interpretation!! :)

Wed, January 10th, 2018 7:00pm

れっくる

I can't elaborate what to say, but this is a good one. Thanks for the hard work!

Wed, January 10th, 2018 1:26pm

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Thank you so much for the nice comments!! n.n

Wed, January 10th, 2018 7:00pm

scatteredsquirrel

Beautifully written. As everyone else has said, you do have an exceptional talent for writing poetry. Your poem and words were packed with emotion and passion, and I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the great work:)

Thu, January 11th, 2018 6:30pm

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Thank you so much for the nice comments and feedback!! :') I'm so happy that you enjoyed reading it!! Thank you!! n.n

Thu, January 11th, 2018 11:39am

Mastera

I have no idea how poems are really supposed to work, and frankly, I cannot tell the different between a good and a bad poem.

But.

whatever you did, you did very well. That actually sparked a few visions in my head, and so far, that's never happened on Booksie. This poem would make an amazing song.

Congratulations, and major props, to you.

Sat, January 13th, 2018 10:13am

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Thank you so much!! :D I'm really glad that you liked it!! n.n
Thank you so much for reading it!! :)

Sat, January 13th, 2018 2:35pm

Momina Khan

so sweet and adorable........................WELLDONE !!!!
be happy :D

Fri, January 19th, 2018 10:35am

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Thank you so much!! :D
You too!! n.n

Fri, January 19th, 2018 2:41pm

X-XCXlToEuNdTSAtTiInOgNer-

Gee this is good! keep it up!

Thu, February 1st, 2018 9:35am

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Thank you so much!! :D

Sun, February 4th, 2018 1:37pm

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