Exsanguination

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Non-Fiction  |  House: Booksie Classic


Exsanguination

 

Bleeding out but not

of blood;

energy

from me does flood.

Too tired now to keep

on going,

reasons, well,

from me they’re flowing.

Better just to leave me

here,

you’re guiltless,

not to blame, don’t fear.

I’m wanting now to close

my eyes,

stay blinded

to future’s surprise.

Leave me now and let

me sleep,

exhausted now

it’s gone too deep.


Submitted: January 13, 2018

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Mike S.

Don't let 'em win, Hull--excellent none-the-less!

Sat, January 13th, 2018 7:39pm

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Do you know the feeling, almost too tired to breathe, just wanting to give in but you know you can't -- that's what this is about. Thanks for reading.

Sat, January 13th, 2018 11:55am

jaylisbeth

Yes, I am familiarized with this feeling very well. Excellent write!

Sat, January 13th, 2018 8:00pm

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I don't know how else to describe it -- it's so much more than tiredness. Thanks for reading, jaylisbeth.

Sat, January 13th, 2018 12:06pm

Sue Harris

Sleep Hully, recharge your batteries. Such an emotional poem!

Sat, January 13th, 2018 8:58pm

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Problem is, Sue, it doesn't seem to work! Thanks for reading.

Sat, January 13th, 2018 1:27pm

Tom Allen714

Well Done Hull, some of us prefer to stay blind, if you don't really see it, it can't really hurt you...Tom...

Sat, January 13th, 2018 10:21pm

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I guess that is kind of true, Tom, or at least if it does we won't see it coming. Thanks for reading.

Sat, January 13th, 2018 3:22pm

Dr. Acula

I could feel the breathlessness in this piece, like words being panted out, a few at a time, never giving up, however, the heart, mind, body and soul can only take so much, ...before...
Also, exsanguination is a killer word !

Sun, January 14th, 2018 1:59am

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Yeah, it is, isn't it. Another one of my favorites to go with discombobulated!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment, Doc.

Sun, January 14th, 2018 5:19am

Jeff Bezaire

Real friends never leave someone behind. They're there to listen and to help; to haul you up when you need it and encourage you to keep going! Some things must be faced alone, but that doesn't mean you can't have a cheering squad ready behind you. If only friends had a charger they could plug you into to get you back to one-hundred percent! A handy-dandy device that needs to be invented this century!

Sun, January 14th, 2018 8:43pm

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Exactly! I'd love some kind of charging station because sometimes sleep just doesn't seem to work. Thanks for that comment, Jeff, it means a lot.

Sun, January 14th, 2018 1:14pm

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