The Colors of Fire
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Book by: M. A. Yacone
When the flames of war engulf the world, two men will face each other; and themselves.
Table of Contents
Submitted: January 22, 2018
The Wolf Who Prayed for Massacre
Submitted: January 22, 2018
The Hound Who Spoke of Bargains
Submitted: January 29, 2018
Submitted: February 06, 2018
A Love and Hatred to Bury Each Other
Submitted: March 31, 2018
Let Them Dance, Sayeth the Crow
Submitted: April 11, 2018
When Lions Weep, Kingdoms Come
Submitted: May 01, 2018
Submitted: May 01, 2018
The Shadow's Promise Fulfilled
Submitted: May 12, 2018
Submitted: May 18, 2018
Submitted: May 19, 2018
Submitted: May 19, 2018
Weave Me a Thread, Laughed the Spider
Submitted: May 20, 2018
Submitted: June 05, 2018
Submitted: June 13, 2018
Depravity Forged on Wood and Stone
Submitted: June 16, 2018
The Battle of the Blasted Plains
Submitted: June 17, 2018
Submitted: June 20, 2018
From Heavenly Light to Hellfire
Submitted: June 24, 2018
A Fateful Bargain Between Crow and Spider
Submitted: August 22, 2018
Submitted: September 19, 2018
And Lo, There Walked an Avatar of Malice
Submitted: September 19, 2018
Submitted: September 21, 2018
Recent Comments
Beautifully written. Very interesting as well. I'll admit, I had my reservations, as I wasn't quite in the mood for a longer story. I'm glad I decided to read though. Very intriguing and right up my alley. Expect me to keep my eyes peeled on the accuracy of your bladed combat scenes! :)
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Thank you! I'm glad I could nail the combat scenes and could captivate your attention.
First, I have to say, fantastic dialogue. And the fighting is so well described, in all of it's brutality. Looking forward to seeing where you take this, M. A.
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Thank you! This chapter was originally going to remain a one-shot short story, but then the gears started going and it started to become more. You will enjoy the plot twists I have in place as well. Glad you enjoy it!
I don't quite understand the revelation to the priest and also why didn't the knight defend himself when his eyes were getting blinded?
Otherwise I loved the descriptions and dialouge here! :)
Author
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Glad you enjoyed it!
As for the priest, I'm not sure who you mean. If by that you mean the swordsman in black armor, he revealed to the knight (his brother) why he did what he did to get exiled which turned out to be influenced by the knight.
The knight did not defend himself because of the trauma of barely surviving an explosion that destroyed the castle and killed the king who was inside it and the shock from his brother's revelation.
If I didn't make those parts clear, I'll be sure to look back and rewrite it as best I can. Regardless, thank you for your feedback!
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