Amazing People

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: True Confessions  |  House: Booksie Classic

What do i have to do to stand on the same ground as the ones I admire?

Amazing people
acchieving their dreams


To the top

Amazing people
all I can see

Is their backs

Growing smaller

and smaller

As they grow larger

at the top of the stairs

They won't wait because

Amazing people
are all around me

Running past
bumping into me

They belong to no one

They follow their path
the one they chose

Amazing people
I want to be one of them

Want to run alongside

With them
Past them

Challenging them

So I guess I'll start now


Always courteous and polite, yet
never letting the top out of my sight

Onward and upward
it's the only way to go

So, I guess it's finally time 

just to see
How big of an

Amazing person

I am going to be

Submitted: January 23, 2018

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Dr.David BK's

Nice words....motivated poem

Tue, January 23rd, 2018 4:21pm


Thank you, David :)

Tue, January 23rd, 2018 10:29am


You can see where you want to be....keep going and you'll get there. Nice self-motivational piece, Jay.

Tue, January 23rd, 2018 10:14pm


It's really hard to keep it going a lot of times, but when you really wanna get up there you know? Anyhow, thanks for the read, Hully!

Tue, January 23rd, 2018 2:22pm

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