It's all your fault

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic


It is all your fault, yes it is all yours

Why have you come to me, so close?

You could say me to get aside

It’s all your fault that now I have to abide!

 

It’s only you who prompts the sensation in my wings

I come to your call when the bell of my heart it rings

You could hurt, jerk me away

It’s all your fault that you’ve kept me stay!

 

It’s the song from your lips that is hypnotizing

I hear you being nearer and it’s so mesmerizing

You could kill me with your voice

It’s all your fault that you didn’t pick this choice!

 

It’s only the ocean in your eyes that is profound

I drown in them to never, again be found

You could sink me deep down to death

It’s all your fault that you’ve given me again this breath!

 

It’s only the gaps in your hands that invited mine

I sparkled delightfully as stars on the black twinkle and shine

You could break me, wipe out my glitter

It’s all your fault that you’ve never been bitter!

 

It’s only the magnetic powers of your name

I get inclined towards you as if my heart you flame

You could shut me up and close the gate

It’s all your fault that you’ve kept me in wait!

 

It’s all your fault, yes it is all yours

I can’t step away as I’ve come so close

You cannot say me to be off and move ahead

I won’t be able to as it will be the day I’m dead!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Submitted: February 09, 2018

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jaylisbeth

Such an emotional write, my love. Very well penned.

Fri, February 9th, 2018 1:35pm

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Thanks darling

Fri, February 9th, 2018 6:09am

LeParadisNoirPoetique

This is a deep impact of emotional writing. Where you love someone with the love of your heart, but your heart is getting no love back to fill it. When your body only contains the love you give to someone, it begins turning you to stone rather than a rose, and you become someone that is rotting away like flowers missing the touch of water. It's a horrible feeling, and it's a horrible worse because the only day we can depart is when we fall in love with death instead. One of your most powerful pieces dearest, one that is full of emotional pain and yearning. I love some of your lines of pain, the imagery is when love feels like suicide instead. This is beautiful my sweet Rehmat, and you will always have your heart loved, I'll make sure of that ;) You pen this greatly and sweetly, brilliant piece of poetry.

Fri, February 9th, 2018 3:23pm

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Aww how sweet of you, thank you dearest for your kind words :)

Sun, February 11th, 2018 8:07pm

Mike S.

Powerful poem, Rehmat!

Fri, February 9th, 2018 6:02pm

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Huh! Only :( Haha thanks Mike

Sun, February 11th, 2018 8:08pm

hullabaloo22

Oh, I love this one, Rehmat. Very strong, looking at the adored as being at fault for causing an attraction that can't be resisted. Excellent!

Fri, February 9th, 2018 9:02pm

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Yay! Thank you Hully for your loveliest appreciation as always :)

Sun, February 11th, 2018 8:07pm

saphiara

WoWwwwwwwWWW
How do you do it! I wish I could write like you

Mon, February 12th, 2018 12:04pm

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Awww thank you Saphiara :) It means a lot

Mon, February 12th, 2018 4:45am

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