Darts

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


She was the darts board to everyone's own self hate.

But she gave them the darts and thanked them for hitting her.

- I deserved it though


Submitted: February 11, 2018

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Bert Broomberg

I liked the poem, but I think the shift from "she" to "I" doesn't work. I would opt for being consistent, onbe or the other. Especially in short poems that seems to work better.

Sun, February 11th, 2018 3:07pm

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