A sinner's tale

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Vintage Publishing


 

 

 

Let my eyes tell you a tale,

I’ll try my best to never fail.

I’ll tell a story without sound,

I am relieved you are around.

 

You make me weak but also strong,

To love like this it could be wrong.

A sinner’s tale; untold desires,

The passion burns like wildfires.

 

In secrecy with desperate eyes,

We will come up with those white lies.

And we shall dance and intertwine,

With shivers up and down my spine.

 

‘I can’t believe that I am here’,

It’s what I whisper in your ear.

I’ll let our passion take the score,

While we indulge forevermore.

 

 


Submitted: February 27, 2018

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Adam L.

Well, well, Lis! I am jaw-dropped. What a beautiful and sensual poem. The picture is fantastic. Love the flirty approach and the secret indulgence.

Tue, February 27th, 2018 3:49pm

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Thank you, Adam :) Just a little playful write.

Tue, February 27th, 2018 7:58am

Rehmat Tanzila

Majestic! Dearest! But why call it a sinner's tale? Well, I loved it as usual! :)

Tue, February 27th, 2018 3:52pm

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Thank you, my dear Just a play of words, that's all. The poem is Fiction after all. My inspiration is starving.

Tue, February 27th, 2018 7:56am

Jeff Bezaire

Wow, you write with enchanting words. Seriously, I'm fighting back a chill from running up my spine, this is a beautifully wicked piece. There feels like a variety of emotions swirling through this piece, but the passion is definitely the most palpable. That last stanza is so good! Those last two lines are quite the naughty ones. What a tale you've told with this one, Lisbeth! You've painted with more than words in this piece.

Tue, February 27th, 2018 6:49pm

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Awwww well thank you so much, Jeff :) I am so flattered you liked it.

Tue, February 27th, 2018 10:52am

Sue Harris

The excitement of a forbidden love, the secrecy, the electricity. Love this JB, very sensual, and expertly written. Well done!

Tue, February 27th, 2018 7:47pm

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Thank you, Sue. Branching out a little bit. I've been struggling with inspiration lately.

Tue, February 27th, 2018 12:07pm

Mike S.

I'm happy for you, J.B!

Tue, February 27th, 2018 8:16pm

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Thank you, Mike :) you are so kind.

Tue, February 27th, 2018 12:18pm

hullabaloo22

Perfect match to the cover pic, jaylisbeth. You're back from the depths of sadness!

Tue, February 27th, 2018 8:47pm

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Yes I am, Hully :) thank you so much.

Tue, February 27th, 2018 12:53pm

ChristopherErick

Outstanding poem jaylisbeth. Full of sensation. :)

Wed, February 28th, 2018 2:31am

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Thanks, Chris :)

Wed, February 28th, 2018 6:47am

LeParadisNoirPoetique

You seem back from the ashes of sadness, and definitely a fiction piece about being a sinner helps. It's very seductive as it is mesmerising, so I applaud you for writing a piece a little more daring than usual, because if it helps you feel in a better place, then writing about any subject is perfect. Maybe for your fiction pieces going forward, adding a little sin can help your inspiration more. This is delicious I must say, and it is flirty and seductive. It's fiction, so it's just a little fun, and a damn good poem. Your rhyming is a passionate temptation, and they fit perfectly with the seductiveness of the poem. Great writing here Lisbeth :)

Wed, February 28th, 2018 6:09pm

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Thank you very much, Dexter :)

Thu, March 1st, 2018 7:42am

Tom Allen714

Really great poem Jaylisbeth...Tom...

Sun, April 1st, 2018 3:00pm

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Thank you so much, Tom :)

Mon, April 2nd, 2018 7:09am

Death writer.

Nicely penned. I really enjoyed the poem. This is a beautiful poem. I loved this poem.

Tue, April 17th, 2018 8:51pm

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Thank You so much for taking the time t9 read and comment :)

Tue, April 17th, 2018 3:53pm

Joy Shaw

Steamy one, lis!

Fri, April 27th, 2018 12:09pm

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Thank you, Joy :)

Fri, April 27th, 2018 5:59am

Damp Kitten

I saw this when I signed on, thought it was a book! But it's a poem! And I love poems....particularly about secret sins and love affairs. "In secrecy with desperate eyes"...my favorite line! You have a nice meter in this piece, very seductive!

Sat, April 28th, 2018 1:47am

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Awwww thank you so much! I really appreciate your words. I'm a big fan of yours on Silk.

Mon, April 30th, 2018 6:26am

James Kingston

Incredible

Fri, August 24th, 2018 2:23pm

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Thank you very much :)

Fri, August 24th, 2018 7:43am

C.A.A.

There is a whole story inside of this. Definitely opens up the imagination.

Mon, November 25th, 2019 5:46pm

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Thank you for taking the time, friend :)

Mon, December 2nd, 2019 8:29am

Doria sanders

I really enjoyed this. Wonderful job.

Thu, April 23rd, 2020 6:30pm

Grace 96-M

????Well written!

Wed, July 22nd, 2020 12:54pm

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