The Bog Land

Reaper

Brava. Very good poem Hully. Loved every word of it. A depressive poem but a hint of death about your spirit haunting the place. Nice ghost poem.

Jeff Bezaire

A good poem, though despairing, but it has some elements to it that are reminiscent of classic poems, and the cover pic gives off a classic vibe, too. This piece feels as though it belongs with the greats of the early twentieth century.
When reading it, I can't help but think of something we talked about last week.
You've written an eloquent piece, Hully.

Dr. Acula

One of my close family members, (R.I.P.) used to say to me, in certain times; " We are too good for this world."
Of course I never I thought I was too good, but I know what they meant, ( concerning this world, we live in ).
I want to tell you the same thing Hully, because its true, even if we don't believe it or will ever know it... ( still dont feel as though I am too good, but there is that motivation to keep fighting, no matter what, its all we have )
" We are too good for this world ! "

Sue Harris

Such haunting desperation, written with an eerie kind of unemotional acceptance. Brilliantly written, but a hard, disturbing read. Take care, Hully!

Mike S.

Who knows, maybe you'll run under a streetlight, so you'll miss the bog entirely?

jaylisbeth

Haunting and so well crafted. Excellent job, Hully.