From affection to rejection-always with you

LeParadisNoirPoetique

Like the most beautiful thing ever written. I am bedazzled by this, and find it so touching and moving. A haunting presence between your words and rhymes, but not like a ghost. It shows a person once a lover now a friend, but you can still be there no matter what, because love can exist through anything. "May I come to your garden and give you a rose" is so passionate, because that garden is Eden between two people, and it is so heartfelt. Going from affection to rejection is difficult, yet always being there for a person is what keeps the garden alive, because love can stay between two people, regardless of affection or rejection. Some of your lines are the most beautiful you have ever wrote, and when you find affection, I hope you never find rejection. I really want to decipher each line, but this comment will end up being a book, so I'll keep it short :) This poem shows that if the love is still there, then affection departing from former lovers is not rejection, it is two people on a new plane, because being by someone always is real life, and not a word. I love the last line "from affection to rejection - I'll always be with you...." because it has more meaning and care, and it's why people can last forever with a different affection, one that contains no rejection. Rehmat I hope love never rejects you, because I never will, and I'll always be with you. This poem is staying on my heart, it's beautiful, a masterpiece of written poetry, and I'll keep you in my heart too :)

Mike S.

To be able to ease someone's suffering? Excellent, Rehmat!

hullabaloo22

This is really kind of haunting, Rehmat.....Timeless, too. Excellent work!

Jeff Bezaire

The distance between two people may only be a couple feet, but it can feel like endless kilometres when one pushes the other away. Your words beautifully express the sorrow of rejection, and that concern that will never flee when someone cares for another. Well done!