Frequently, I feel
a dreadful unsatisfactory,
where no one can save me , all for except myself,
as I grow taller and taller,
stretched out,
until this tender affect of my accomplishments,
become more boring,
pulled down;
by the weight of someone else story.
Then, I shrink down
to size of a small tear in some miniscule heart,
while I watch the burden of my battery,
drain out into the sea of where everything acidic powerfully starts;
an ocean of madness that keeps calm in the calamity of this peacefulness,
under a howling moon,
pulling the tide of its gravity into existence
inspiring to seek a new creativity.
As I walk away from this earthly poker table of daylight,
swimming in this dissolving gamble of words,
laying down my cards with nothing left,
all I have saved up into one chance,
one shoulder carried poker chip,
I fold my four aces, and two kings,
because I'd rather dance,
than sing.
We love in silence,
as the sound of our hushed voice,
makes a violent tool.
© Copyright 2018 Dr. Acula . All rights reserved.
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Great Poem From You As Always
“You are the only handsomest one who takes my mind pass the stars with your gift of words. Once I grasp the gift of your tongue, as if you’re using your mouth to communicate. I breath, and then in return, you shove words down my throat for me to choke on with a hidden meaning. I always told you, you have that je ne sais quoi with words. From your mind to my eyes is always an enjoyable feeling to experience.”
Very nice!
Love and Hugs…K/R
Kemy
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I always feel like think my attempt is more meaningful than my outcome. Though I will admit, my outcome sometimes feels more meaningful than my attempt, if I can be honest; and I am that.
I do not know what writing is, It is actually strange to me, but I do know what words mean ; and what they can do.
I never expect to be understood. But, I do hope for a connection.
Not sure how you always seem to connect, but that means a 'something' to me.
Hove and Lugs...S/M
Me
Wow Dr. This is outstanding. Powerful amazingly written lines. The lines have a twist to them. It flows perfectly . That's it , I admit you are way better than me . Hands down . My favorite that I have read so far tonight.
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lol Thanks CE.......!
And, dude I am not better than you, ever, we stand together, on the edge of what is to be..
hands up, we are equal.
Respect.
Phenomenal write, Doc! Excellent and profound lines.
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Thank you very much Lisbeth !
Oh, this one is excellent, Doc, from the battery all the way to the chips! Loved it!
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Thank you so much =^..^= . Hully !
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