Knowledge not for the Corrupt

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A story in progress about a dark world with dark people. My first attempt at writing a novel. With it, I want to introduce myself to writing. Will be very eager to listen and respond to any
critique you might have to my work. Feel free to discuss and all flaws that my style/story/characters/world has. And please be constructive, we are all kind people here, aren't we ;)

Fantasy dark grim dark-fantasy

Chapter 1

A Meeting by Chance

Wild Pig. A pretty commonplace for a bunch of scum, thieves and crooked men alike to come together and talk over their wicked plans for t... Read Chapter

Chapter 2

The Wrong and the Corrupt

The goon and Ansgar were standing alone, surrounded by 3 soaked in blood corpses. Distant crows were singing their songs of grea... Read Chapter

Chapter 2

The Wrong and the Corrupt part 2

Ansgar was standing, gripping his sword with his hand. Stooped and not knowing what to say or what to do. Looking at the collapsed masked... Read Chapter

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Saira S Kamal Tiba

I loved chapter 1 so much

Tue, April 10th, 2018 9:40pm

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Thank you for the feedback! I have just finished writing chapter two. Feel free to read some more! I will try my best to produce consistently increasingly good writing ;)
If you have any suggestions as to how to improve my writing, feel free to share them. I will be very happy! ;P

Tue, April 10th, 2018 7:06pm