The City of The Bells (Vol 1)

Thank you for letting me read your story! You have a deeply contextual and fascinating story at work here. Good start! Good writing, and Keep writing. Aldus Ringvold: I like that name.

Thank you

Tim

I wish i could write english like you, makes me feel a tad inferior.
Oh well, thankfully i live in beautyful Norway.

Thank you for bringing this to my attention, I really enjoyed the intrigue and mystery of the City.
Your writing is amazing, I feel like my own writing in comparison is nothing but child play.

Intriguing start, I'm clicking over to read chapter 2 in a moment!

I love the fact that the people who designed the presentation were lazy, and left in anachronisms. Sweat pants in Italy 500 years ago? Haha!

I'll send you a more detailed review privately, I don't want to clog up your comments with a 500 word nitpicking session ;)

I think you have a real talent for world building from the get go and as a reader I'm left curious as to what exactly is going on in the City. It's clear you've spent a lot of time thinking carefully about the world which your characters inhabit.

I'll send some more detailed feedback in a private message but thought I'd put some thoughts out there so more people have a read!

I don't know how to put into words how thrilled and elated I am to have found this book. I absolutely love the world building and characters so far, and those are always the main things I look for in any literature I read. I can tell you've put a lot of work into this, and your creativity is nothing short of phenomenal. This is a book that I would enthusiastically recommend to anyone who likes fantasy and even to those who don't make a habit of reading this genre. I just thank my lucky stars that I came across your book. It's original, detailed, well-written, elegant, and, most of all, it transports to me another world entirely. It's a world that I hate to leave once I'm reading it, and when I put it down, it consumes my thoughts. This may just be a work born of genius. You and your work have inspired me to create, to push myself, and to be gracious. I'll definitely be recommending your work to all of my friends.