Ocean Floor Tanka

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic


This type of short poem speaks for itself.


Ocean Floor Tanka

 

Wet darkness around
a sunken Mount Everest
without a base camp,
where spooky creatures hunt for
prey under pressure.
 

 


Submitted: April 13, 2018

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Mike S.

Excellent sea-deal, Bert!

Fri, April 13th, 2018 5:01pm

Mike S.

Excellent sea-deal, Bert!

Fri, April 13th, 2018 5:01pm

Mike S.

How many times can this comment be posted? Let's find out, shall we?

Fri, April 13th, 2018 5:02pm

hullabaloo22

This really illustrates the spookiness of the deep sea. Very effective, Bert.

Fri, April 13th, 2018 8:01pm

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Thank you. I guess it's the spookiest place on earth; even spookier than some seats of government.

Sun, April 15th, 2018 2:40am

tom mcmullen

Good One.

Sat, April 14th, 2018 6:34am

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Thanks for reading and commenting.

Sun, April 15th, 2018 2:41am

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