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Open your mind.

Dies the Light, leading forth with over shrinking power.

Dies the Day, blurry distortion of tommorows promise.

Dies the Warmth, killing to life the hunt for new skin.

Dies the Fire, hungering for a feast.

Dies the Time, counting backwards reaching forward.

Dies the Night, grown back pushing time alive.

Dies the Moment, passing distantly as a star streaming across the sky.

Dies the Life, confessing divine dimly glared affections.

Dies The Question, Dies the Answer.

Dies the Need, Dies the Want.



Submitted: April 20, 2018

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Mesmerizing words doctor A. Intriguing.

Fri, April 20th, 2018 4:49am


Thanks Chris !

Fri, April 20th, 2018 10:14am


Random thoughts make the best poetry :) This is fantastic.

Fri, April 20th, 2018 1:53pm


This refreshing to hear,. I kind of feel like I should keep them to myself most of the time, but every once in while, its nice to write them out ))
Thanks for saying that Lisbeth xoxo

Fri, April 20th, 2018 10:29am


A whole lot of death effectively expressed Doc.

Fri, April 20th, 2018 8:14pm


Thanks Hully, I just like the way "Dies the ..." sounded. "
"Dies the Love, haunting me and never going away."
I probably should do a " Lives the..." piece as I am much more positive than this piece, but it made sense at the time !
Thank you :)

Fri, April 20th, 2018 1:21pm

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