Disappearing

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


It is a story of an evil spirit that torments people by following them and make them lose their way back home, in very isolated places.

Submitted: April 30, 2018

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Disappearing

Alone, desperate and anxious, always hiding observing getting exited, just waiting an opportunity knowing the time will come. Little Tommy ask her mother to play outside, be careful don’t go to far she said and he nodded, he grabbed his toys and leaved. Marcus, Tommy´s older brother used to stay all night with his friend Arnold exploring near the river, always planning pranks. Some say he is crazy, some say he had lost his family, when actually nobody knew why he was so lonely, living inside the forest far away from people, everybody called him Dozer. Marcus and Arnold frequently saw him fishing by the river wondering about his precedence, he is so creepy Arnold said, I know but I’m curious about him said Marcus, they decided to talk to him, and that night they walked all the way to his cabin. A little bit scared they knock the door, unfortunately nobody answered, and unwillingly they walked away. By the time Marcus arrived to his home he realized something bad had just happened, neither his mom nor Tommy were around, it was so late, that was odd usually his mom was waiting for him and his brother was already in bed, worried he began to look for them. Marcus began to ask the neighbors about his mom and Tommy, nobody knew anything about them. Afraid started to walk without noticing, he end up by the river again, he sat down and look at the sky and began to cry, “don’t worry you’ll be okay”, he listened behind a tree, scare to death he asked, who is it, (whisper) just a friend, he approximate to the tree and no one was there, he could not get that of his head, and thought there is a place I haven’t gone yet, he went to the cabin and when he was very close he could hear people talking inside, suddenly everything got quiet and he screamed from outside, mom, Tommy are you there, the door opened it was Dozer, and furious shout, “go away he will find you and take you with him”,  Fearless Marcus went inside the cabin but he saw no one, started looking everywhere and he couldn’t find them, the place was empty, angry as hell Dozer shout again “go away you’ll die if he finds you”. What are you talking about? Said Marcus, where is my mom and Tommy? (Dozer), he takes advantage when you are sad please leave, I don’t want to see him again. Marcus went away still sad because he couldn’t find his mother and brother, walking through the forest Marcus felt that something was there staring at him, following him, there was a weird smell like when he went to visit his grandma’s grave, practically he smelled death on the air. He started to run but it was still there, suddenly something pulled his shirt and fell down, he was really scared however he turned his head to see what made him fall, but he saw nothing, after that started to think about what Dozer had told him, what did he mean by that? Ready to go home, Marcus began walking again, when he felt something grabbing his leg, look down ad he could finally saw it, a small white dog, but he couldn’t see its face and angry shout “let me go or I kill you”, the dog turned up his face and Marcus saw huge big red angry eyes, he couldn’t move, he was paralyzed, the dog started to grow, huge as an elephant and really big teeth, scare like hell Marcus passed out. Later he woke up without remember anything, he went straight to his house, and he saw his mom and brother crying, there was a lot of people outside gossiping about that the same thing happened to Dozer’s brother and sister, that’s why he didn’t like to get alone with anybody, Marcus went inside and he saw a coffin in the middle of his house, he went closer and closer and watched inside the box, speechless about what he saw started to cry, he could see his dead body inside the box, but he wasn’t sad about he being dead was sad about Tommy and his mom crying over his dead body. Trying to assimilate what had just happened Marcus started to think, “this is a dream”, and went outside and there it was, waiting for him, staring at him with those red eyes saying like “you are mine”.


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