Come hither my only ornament, I adore

Prettify me, let the world say no more!

Tender on my neck as the glittering chain of gold

Be the unsung love and the one that’s untold!


Let me be mad about you once again

Bear this craziness as an idiocy’s emblem

Leave everything and everyone around, about or nearby

Fly with me and land on that quixotic Little Sky


Could you write with me a romantic poem?

By softening for a minute your heart of stone!

Surrendered I have, lowered my lash, what else to do?

Shattered piece of my heart has come to mourn with its crew!


Come hither before this call gets silent

Let’s just cherish the fire that’s pacing violent!

The space between you and I has no account

Cannot we for a moment stay a little heart-bound?


Signing off with a last couplet as you desired

Extended pleas and woes, I reckon will never be required!



Submitted: May 04, 2018

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Dr. Acula

Quite beautiful.

Fri, May 4th, 2018 4:22am


Thanks so much :)

Thu, May 3rd, 2018 10:59pm

Mike S.

A fine 'needing reassurance' poem, Rehmat!

Fri, May 4th, 2018 6:14pm


Thanks Mike :)

Thu, May 24th, 2018 11:21pm


Quite unusual, Rehmat, and great to read.

Fri, May 4th, 2018 8:41pm


Thanks Hull!!!

Mon, May 7th, 2018 2:46am


This is beautiful indeed. It is asking for reassurance so that love can be tender again. Like a gentle plea so that everything will be OK, and then the roses heart will be able to bloom again. I love this side of your poetry, because it shows the passion is still there, but it needs reassurance of love existing for it to be pure again. Your words are like nature, so beautiful in their meaning, and your rhyming like the flowers wanting to grow in spring. There is such a beauty in your poetry, and this is excellent, yet so beautiful dearest.

Sun, May 6th, 2018 7:13pm


Aww thanks so much dearest friend :)

Mon, May 7th, 2018 2:43am

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