Status:
In Progress |
Genre: Romance |
House:
Booksie Classic
Table of Contents
Submitted: May 06, 2018
Letters Episode 1: “Rukasu Okami”
“It’s been 10 years since that dreadful day. My mom was shot by someone in an al... Read Chapter
Submitted: May 06, 2018
Letters Episode 2: “The Annoying Mail Girl”
“As you can probably tell by now, I easily get annoyed and irritated. Es... Read Chapter
Submitted: May 06, 2018
Letters Episode 3: "Heartbeat"
“I know what you’re thinking, why am I such a douche to a girl I just met? To be honest... Read Chapter
Submitted: May 09, 2018
Letters Episode 4: “You Need Me”
“I feel like it’s been so long, that I had forgotten how it feels to have a ... Read Chapter
Recent Comments
Comment | 105 words
Fri, May 11th, 2018 12:56am
Hello from R again,
As a secondary comment I shall say that your main character is Rukasu and he is a man. The two women characters only support the main Character and are not developed or mentioned otherwise. If I read another story of yours I would like it if the main character is a woman. Just to show that you can sympathise with a main female protagonist. Also I would like to see lots of interior monologue, that is, the thoughts of the characters. This would beef up the story and round out the rather flat characters. thanx - until later - Raymond Crane
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